Sunset

Dark nimbus clouds form from far,
Eagles, Egrets and Hamerkops fly above in circles,
Eyeing the delicious evening picnic dinner on our laps.

Small waves form towards the beach,
But we still kissing in the sea
as we enjoyed the beautiful scenery.

In my old but sure partner,
We in her comfortably,
casting very long shadows on the water.

Imagine what we see?
Before us, there it was,
The most beautiful thing we've ever experienced,

In our honeymoon,
We witnessed the sunset in the sea.
Just the two of us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 10:19 PM
amazing imagery
Juman Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 7:27 PM
James this is Excellent my friend--That's a 7 +++ please do check my out tell me what you think
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November 9, 2015 at 2:18 PM
Very nice, James. A cozy little poem. My best regards! :) john
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