Sunset

The sunset bids quick goodbye. It leaves behind Orangey-red days, Light-grey shadows That slowly dip into one's mind.

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James Fraser

Date: 10/22/2014 3:20:00 PM

Deep poetry, allowing a ray of light to break free, love it. Just my thoughts, James :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/30/2014 5:19:00 AM

Your poem depicts a strong bond between Sun and ourselves. It's true.Sun is the powerhouse that runs the solar system and we are under his protection. Every shade of the sun leaves a corresponding shade in us literally as well as metaphorically that you have pictured with nine colors with a grand finish. Love hija de la luna. Bless.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 10/16/2014 8:20:00 PM

thank you, Rajat, for the visit and the kind words. God bless