Sunset

The sunset bids 
quick goodbye.

It leaves behind
Orangey-red days,
Light-grey shadows 
That slowly dip into one's mind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Deep poetry, allowing a ray of light to break free, love it. Just my thoughts, James :)
Chakrabarty Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 5:19 AM
Your poem depicts a strong bond between Sun and ourselves. It's true.Sun is the powerhouse that runs the solar system and we are under his protection. Every shade of the sun leaves a corresponding shade in us literally as well as metaphorically that you have pictured with nine colors with a grand finish. Love hija de la luna. Bless.
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October 16, 2014 at 8:20 PM
thank you, Rajat, for the visit and the kind words. God bless
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