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Sunset

The sun is setting
to a chorus from the birds
as they settle down

To roost through the night
last rays high light the sea's waves
dusk slowly goes to night

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013

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Pratidhwani Biswal Date: 10/27/2017 2:13:00 PM Beautiful... Login to Reply

Mustapha Mohammed Date: 10/6/2013 9:12:00 PM Nothing short of fantastic my dearest Shadow. I hope you're fine...missed you. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 10/10/2013 7:43:00 AM dearest M.M yes I am now had no internet for few days as you know but back now Ty for kind review love Shadow xox smile

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi Date: 9/26/2013 1:52:00 PM Short and creatively meaningful...impressive. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/28/2013 5:51:00 AM Ty OA for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile

Bukang Liwayway Date: 9/26/2013 1:18:00 AM creatively written poem friend Shadow. so like it. thanks for sharing and for passing. have a nice day Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 9/24/2013 7:41:00 PM A very beautiful description of the sun as it sets to night. A lovely and enjoyable read. Very nice work, Shadow!...Thank you for the nice comments! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/25/2013 4:29:00 AM My pleasure Kelly I love your work Ty for lovely review Shadow x smile

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/24/2013 1:54:00 PM I am glad my fingertips led me here.I love haiku so much and above are two excellent examples..Just beautiful ! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/24/2013 4:29:00 PM Hi Charmain I really appreciate your review I too love haiku very pleased you like them Shadow x smile

Kash Poet Date: 9/23/2013 11:59:00 AM Beautiful imagery here in these haiku Shadow.Enjoyed very much. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/23/2013 2:13:00 PM ty Kash I am glad you like them Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath Date: 9/22/2013 10:28:00 AM Beautiful visualization of Sunset. A very sweet imagery. Loved always, bl Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/23/2013 2:14:00 PM ty Bl you always encourage Shadow x smiles

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/21/2013 9:56:00 AM - Shadow,beautiful imagery... love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 2:03:00 PM Ty Anne for reading pleased you like it Shadow x smile

Harry Horsman Date: 9/21/2013 8:17:00 AM love this love the visual, Shadow... Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 8:22:00 AM hi Harry Ty your words mean much to me Shadow x smiles

Jack Ellison Date: 9/21/2013 6:57:00 AM Serene, peaceful picture you present, dear Shadow! Love and hugs xoxox Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 8:23:00 AM hello Jack dear friend ty for such kind words love and hugs Shadow x smiles

Ken Carroll Date: 9/21/2013 5:08:00 AM Hi Linda, Nice observations penned into words.. Ken Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 5:23:00 AM hi Ken and ty for reading have a good weekend Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/21/2013 5:03:00 AM Nice transitory moves well penned, Shadow Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 5:24:00 AM hi Dr Ram Ty dear so kind of you to read and leave such a lovely review enjoy your weekend Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/21/2013 12:50:00 AM Like a little prayer at the end of day! Sweet one. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 4:51:00 AM hi Andrea Ty yes it could be nice of you to take time to read Shadow x smile

Shirley Candy Date: 9/20/2013 4:33:00 PM Beautiful imagery, Shadow..I love every words you wrote here...great Haikus..well done... ^___^ Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 9/21/2013 4:59:00 AM Hi Shirley so nice of you to visit my work Ty for your time in reading and good review Shadow x smile