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Sunset

The sun is setting to a chorus from the birds as they settle down To roost through the night last rays high light the sea's waves dusk slowly goes to night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/27/2017 2:13:00 PM
Beautiful...
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Date: 10/6/2013 9:12:00 PM
Nothing short of fantastic my dearest Shadow. I hope you're fine...missed you.
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Date: 10/10/2013 7:43:00 AM
dearest M.M yes I am now had no internet for few days as you know but back now Ty for kind review love Shadow xox smile
Date: 9/26/2013 1:52:00 PM
Short and creatively meaningful...impressive.
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:51:00 AM
Ty OA for reading and enjoying Shadow x smile
Date: 9/26/2013 1:18:00 AM
creatively written poem friend Shadow. so like it. thanks for sharing and for passing. have a nice day
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Date: 9/24/2013 7:41:00 PM
A very beautiful description of the sun as it sets to night. A lovely and enjoyable read. Very nice work, Shadow!...Thank you for the nice comments!
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Date: 9/25/2013 4:29:00 AM
My pleasure Kelly I love your work Ty for lovely review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
I am glad my fingertips led me here.I love haiku so much and above are two excellent examples..Just beautiful !
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/24/2013 4:29:00 PM
Hi Charmain I really appreciate your review I too love haiku very pleased you like them Shadow x smile
Date: 9/23/2013 11:59:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here in these haiku Shadow.Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 9/23/2013 2:13:00 PM
ty Kash I am glad you like them Shadow x smile
Date: 9/22/2013 10:28:00 AM
Beautiful visualization of Sunset. A very sweet imagery. Loved always, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2013 2:14:00 PM
ty Bl you always encourage Shadow x smiles
Date: 9/21/2013 9:56:00 AM
- Shadow,beautiful imagery... love it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/21/2013 2:03:00 PM
Ty Anne for reading pleased you like it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 8:17:00 AM
love this love the visual, Shadow...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 8:22:00 AM
hi Harry Ty your words mean much to me Shadow x smiles
Date: 9/21/2013 6:57:00 AM
Serene, peaceful picture you present, dear Shadow! Love and hugs xoxox
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 8:23:00 AM
hello Jack dear friend ty for such kind words love and hugs Shadow x smiles
Date: 9/21/2013 5:08:00 AM
Hi Linda, Nice observations penned into words.. Ken
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 5:23:00 AM
hi Ken and ty for reading have a good weekend Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 5:03:00 AM
Nice transitory moves well penned, Shadow
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Date: 9/21/2013 5:24:00 AM
hi Dr Ram Ty dear so kind of you to read and leave such a lovely review enjoy your weekend Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 12:50:00 AM
Like a little prayer at the end of day! Sweet one.
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Date: 9/21/2013 4:51:00 AM
hi Andrea Ty yes it could be nice of you to take time to read Shadow x smile
Date: 9/20/2013 5:17:00 PM
A perfect haiku with great imagery :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 4:56:00 AM
hi Anne and welcome to my work glad you enjoyed and left such a nice review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/20/2013 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Shadow..I love every words you wrote here...great Haikus..well done... ^___^
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Date: 9/21/2013 4:59:00 AM
Hi Shirley so nice of you to visit my work Ty for your time in reading and good review Shadow x smile