Barbara Gorelick Poet Choka

Sunset

Mighty Sun- God Ra
Caresses the western hills
Lighting his pathway with fire
With fanciful  brush
He paints the clouds with glory
Fading behind night's curtain


Sunset contest...7/12/12

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Andrea Dietrich July 17, 2012 at 9:18 PM Wonderful, Barbara. It's always a pleasure hearing from you and then going to check out your recent poetry!

Russell Sivey July 13, 2012 at 9:46 AM What a beautiful piece of art Barbara! I really enjoyed this lovely sunset you have painted! Wonderful poem, Great Work!!

Amanda Sullivan July 13, 2012 at 8:39 AM Lovely expressive poem about the beauty of the sunset, enjoyed reading it, thank you :)

Kash Poet July 13, 2012 at 7:29 AM Beautiful poem BG...love it!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2012 at 7:07 AM Wow where did this week go? I am reading some amazing poetry this morning. It was a pleasure to read yours and I thank you for sharing it Barbara. Have a great weekend and I will be back Monday to read more. Love, Carol

Sidney Beck July 13, 2012 at 4:43 AM me likes it....well done