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Sunset

The ripples flow steadily then flutter away The illusion of an impossible feat The Earth consumes the sun at the end of the day A beautiful sight, a sun setting treat Somehow it seems like the sun melts in the ocean Extinguishing its light, all in slow motion We sit and admire it, me myself and I Until the stars are sprinkled, above in the sky The sea gulls hastily, on a fishing spree To avoid being caught by the night Calling to others with a will to stay free As they fill the sky in a frantic flight The breeze blows as if to sweep the impurities away Preparing the Earth for the birth of a new day The sillhouette of people scavenging the sands Some with metal detectors finding cans But the most breath taking of all is the firy red sky Just for a moment as the sun says goodbye All scerene tranquility so fresh and so new But this has no meaning when I’m not with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/26/2010 7:30:00 PM
soup mail,,p.d.
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Date: 9/30/2010 10:06:00 PM
Hi Sidney.Very very beautiful poem. I loved all your imagery and I was moved by the last line-I agree life and all it holds is meant for sharing.Thank you for commenting on my poem.Although I enjoy writing my true pleasure comes from sharing them knowing that in turn they give pleasure which inspires me to write more. Love June (to poet friends)
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:33:00 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:02:00 PM
beautiful write... I didn't know you had it in you! LOL I knew you did really-- you've got talent my friend!
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:27:00 PM
Nothing seems sadder than being surrounded by beauty while you are all alone, Sidney. Very creative descriptions of sunset, especially the fiery red sky, Sidney, and the way the sun appears to blend into the sea. Excellent poem for my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/28/2010 4:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Sidney. The sun does seem to melt into the ocean and I like the idea of breezes blowing away impurities. If only that was true. And as you say in the last verse, beauty is appreciated more when it is shared with someone you love. Best to you, Diane
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Date: 9/28/2010 3:19:00 PM
Wow Sidney this one is super and superbly penned my friend.. enjoyed your wonderful lines luv..
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Date: 9/28/2010 1:44:00 PM
I just discovered another gem in your repertoire Mr. H! Beautiful
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