Sunset

The ripples flow steadily then flutter away
The illusion of an impossible feat
The Earth consumes the sun at the end of the day
A beautiful sight, a sun setting treat

Somehow it seems like the sun melts in the ocean
Extinguishing its light, all in slow motion
We sit and admire it, me myself and I
Until the stars are sprinkled, above in  the sky

The sea gulls hastily, on a fishing spree
To avoid being caught by the night
Calling to others with a will to stay free
As they fill the sky in a frantic flight

The breeze blows as if to sweep the impurities away
Preparing the Earth for the birth of a new day
The sillhouette of people scavenging the sands
Some with metal detectors finding cans

But the most breath taking of all is the firy red sky
Just for a moment as the sun says goodbye
All scerene tranquility so fresh and so new
But this has no meaning when I’m not with you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 26, 2010 at 7:30 PM
soup mail,,p.d.
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September 30, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Hi Sidney.Very very beautiful poem. I loved all your imagery and I was moved by the last line-I agree life and all it holds is meant for sharing.Thank you for commenting on my poem.Although I enjoy writing my true pleasure comes from sharing them knowing that in turn they give pleasure which inspires me to write more. Love June (to poet friends)
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 10:33 AM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Sidney. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 5:02 PM
beautiful write... I didn't know you had it in you! LOL I knew you did really-- you've got talent my friend!
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September 28, 2010 at 4:27 PM
Nothing seems sadder than being surrounded by beauty while you are all alone, Sidney. Very creative descriptions of sunset, especially the fiery red sky, Sidney, and the way the sun appears to blend into the sea. Excellent poem for my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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September 28, 2010 at 4:01 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Sidney. The sun does seem to melt into the ocean and I like the idea of breezes blowing away impurities. If only that was true. And as you say in the last verse, beauty is appreciated more when it is shared with someone you love. Best to you, Diane
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September 28, 2010 at 3:19 PM
Wow Sidney this one is super and superbly penned my friend.. enjoyed your wonderful lines luv..
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 1:44 PM
I just discovered another gem in your repertoire Mr. H! Beautiful
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