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As a spent sun sets, ebony shadows merge with silhouettes; penciled in the rough by a charcoal dusk. A brazen breeze makes me shudder; I feel it's cool breath on my face. And as wolves and fireflies, welcome Night, the moon glints like gold.

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Aibek Kalmaganbetov

Date: 1/13/2025 2:45:00 AM

Short and deep Tall and chief

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2025 7:59:00 AM

Thanks, Aibek; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2024 3:46:00 AM

I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Such a nice scene you have painted. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/17/2024 7:26:00 AM

Thanks, Sara; my friend, I appreciate the placement and your comments. Emile.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/16/2024 9:28:00 PM

Wow! Perfecto. Congratulations on your top win, Emile

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/17/2024 7:25:00 AM

Thanks, Unseeking; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/16/2024 8:41:00 PM

sweet air! congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/17/2024 7:24:00 AM

Thanks, Thriveni; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2024 2:08:00 PM

Lovely imagery! Congrats! Fave

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2024 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, Kim; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/16/2024 9:47:00 AM

- So beautiful, Emile ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas:) - hugs

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/16/2024 11:38:00 AM

Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate your comments. Merry Christmas, my friend. Emile.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/13/2024 12:24:00 AM

Dear emile, this is absolutely gorgeous, i love sunsets and how youv described the environment is beyond stunning and soul warming! I especially love the lines “ penciled in the rough by a charcoal dusk.” how artistic! And the ending flows so well too! This is one of the best iv read for this contest so far. Its beyond gorgeous! A fave for me! Best wishes: sending you light always

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/13/2024 7:20:00 AM

Thanks, Ink; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Jacqueline Elston

Date: 12/12/2024 8:18:00 AM

Just lovely, so poetic. Thank you for sharing. J.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/12/2024 10:00:00 AM

Thanks, Jackie; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.