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Sunset

As a spent sun sets,
ebony shadows
merge with silhouettes;
penciled in the rough
by a charcoal dusk.

A brazen breeze
makes me shudder;
I feel it's cool
breath on my face.

And as wolves
and fireflies,
welcome Night,

the moon
glints like

gold.

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2024

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Aibek Kalmaganbetov Date: 1/13/2025 2:45:00 AM Short and deep Tall and chief Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 1/13/2025 7:59:00 AM Thanks, Aibek; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/17/2024 3:46:00 AM I want to personally thank you for your entry in my contest. Such a nice scene you have painted. Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/17/2024 7:26:00 AM Thanks, Sara; my friend, I appreciate the placement and your comments. Emile.

Unseeking Seeker Date: 12/16/2024 9:28:00 PM Wow! Perfecto. Congratulations on your top win, Emile Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/17/2024 7:25:00 AM Thanks, Unseeking; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

thriveni c mysore Date: 12/16/2024 8:41:00 PM sweet air! congratulations dear poet. Cheers!!! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/17/2024 7:24:00 AM Thanks, Thriveni; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/16/2024 2:08:00 PM Lovely imagery! Congrats! Fave Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/16/2024 7:10:00 PM Thanks, Kim; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/16/2024 9:47:00 AM - So beautiful, Emile ... congratulations :) - Merry Christmas:) - hugs Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/16/2024 11:38:00 AM Thanks, Anne-Lise; I appreciate your comments. Merry Christmas, my friend. Emile.

Ink Empress Date: 12/13/2024 12:24:00 AM Dear emile, this is absolutely gorgeous, i love sunsets and how youv described the environment is beyond stunning and soul warming! I especially love the lines “ penciled in the rough by a charcoal dusk.” how artistic! And the ending flows so well too! This is one of the best iv read for this contest so far. Its beyond gorgeous! A fave for me! Best wishes: sending you light always Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/13/2024 7:20:00 AM Thanks, Ink; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.

Jacqueline Elston Date: 12/12/2024 8:18:00 AM Just lovely, so poetic. Thank you for sharing. J. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 12/12/2024 10:00:00 AM Thanks, Jackie; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.