Sunset

Crimson painted sky
Clouds drifting by like whispers
Light begins to fade



Copyright © 2009   Lena “Lolita” Townsend

*for Raul’s Nature’s Best Haiku Contest

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Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2009 at 12:39 PM

Very descriptive Haiku here. I can see the sunset. Keep writing. Sara

Elaine George

September 17, 2009 at 1:39 PM

BEAUTIFUL! Just beautiful, dear Lolita. lainie

Joseph Spence Sr

June 28, 2009 at 3:57 PM

I just love it! The imagery is crystal clear and refreshing. I can see myself relaxing in the sunset. Great job! ~Joseph

Brandee Augustus

June 28, 2009 at 9:44 AM

I am really starting to love haikus. Every line of this one is just a perfect poetic description,

Brian Strand

June 24, 2009 at 11:50 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Lolita.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

June 24, 2009 at 8:48 PM

breathless beauty! Lena! congrats on win! jim

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2009 at 4:51 PM

Congratulations Lena on this lovely poem win!!

Trudy Diane Rider

June 24, 2009 at 4:07 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Love the second line! ~Trudy~

Barbara Gorelick

June 24, 2009 at 3:20 PM

Just beautiful..congrats on your win in the contest. Barbara

Raul Moreno

June 24, 2009 at 2:08 PM

Lolita, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

Cesar Cantu

May 17, 2009 at 9:13 PM

Cool =D Sunsets are just so magical and metaphysical in a visual way jojojo people usually do not appreciate the whole trascendance of their manifestation, but you really do and express very well =) thanks for the experience and for the comments =D indeed the point about my poetry is taking daily life and reality to a very different context...to make it different and not so boring...among other things =D wiii

Izzy Gumbo

May 17, 2009 at 6:17 PM

This is beautiful Lolita. It brings a memory of a seaside I used to live near, a sunset walk I used to take there, yes... now it's here in the parks. :) Hugs and many thanks for this treasure!

Abe Lopez

May 17, 2009 at 2:24 PM

awsome write. this is the magical 15 minutes before dark and at sunrise. love the imagery. Thank you for all of your kind words!

Alley Poe

May 16, 2009 at 5:58 PM

I am loving the imagery from crimson red -Alley

P Sheart

May 16, 2009 at 3:27 PM

Hi Lena Oh so soothing and peaceful, feels like home! Absolutely a perfect haiku! Good luck in contest! It's a winner either way for sure. Take care hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Love Light Truth Patricia