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Sunset

sun slowly setting soft reddish hues beauteous death in slow motion 07-November-2020

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P.M. Richter

Date: 11/28/2020 1:43:00 PM

Profound and beautiful ~

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/28/2020 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Richter

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2020 6:06:00 PM

this is SO gorgeous. Wow!!! (and congrats on the win)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/22/2020 6:42:00 PM

ThANks Andrea! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/22/2020 8:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your haiku win. Few words with so much said. "Wonderful" Enjoy your win and day................

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/22/2020 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Paula!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/20/2020 4:34:00 PM

lovely Lines !:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/20/2020 5:57:00 PM

Thank you Jan! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/19/2020 3:52:00 PM

- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/19/2020 6:25:00 PM

Thanks Sunshine Smile! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/19/2020 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your bronze placement with your creative haiku!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/19/2020 6:24:00 PM

Thanks Tania!

Wendy Watson

Date: 11/19/2020 2:12:00 PM

I think this is very clever use of so few words and love the unusual combination of the contrasting adjective and noun 'beauteous death. This is one of my favourites in the contest.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/19/2020 6:24:00 PM

Thank you Wendy!

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 11/7/2020 10:03:00 AM

Great write. Oh! What a comparison - sunrise sunset birth and death. Adding it to my fav. Rama

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/7/2020 7:51:00 PM

Thanks Rama!