Sunset


she loves sunsets
she felt like
it was her heart 
being stretched out the horizon
and letting it bleed
as if it's painting her universe
before the dark takes over
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Agustin Avatar
December 18, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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November 17, 2019 at 2:04 PM
i love sunset and sunrise... great poem..
Mercy Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Thank you! :)
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November 17, 2019 at 2:04 PM
Welcome to poetry soup..
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