Sunset 002

The whining breeze wanes... As evening sun slips away silence is Golden Aug 03 2010 For Rick's "silence is golden"
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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Silence Is Golden". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Congrats, Charles. Nice going. Ralph
Roberts Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:38 AM
beautiful , congrats on your win
Mehta Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 4:53 PM
Congrats on this deserved win, Charles
Gorelick Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 3:14 PM
Your haiku is as good as gold..love it. congrats on your win. BG
Brumley Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:45 PM
Nice...that evening glass of tea before the sun sets...ahhh! Congrats on your win Charles.
Fraser Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 1:05 PM
Beautiful Haiku Charles, most deserved of it's win in Rick's fine contest >> James
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your high placement in this contest with this amazing haiku Charles. Aloha, Connie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Congrats Charles on your big win in Rick's contest with these wonderful words of Haiku.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch win my friend..with luv..
Arteaga Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 3:24 PM
hmmm the words used whining wind and i like the sun slips away c: still always a i great image to see the sun going down n.n
A   Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 1:36 AM
Lovely Charles, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Arteaga Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 12:36 AM
that is a lovely moment when the sun goes down, great haiku
A  Avatar
August 3, 2010 at 12:28 AM
A wonderful HAIKU CHARLES, ENJOYED.~SKAT
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