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GLEEFUL MOUNTAINTOPS

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 14 MARCH 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Sun's Crown

Gleeful mountaintops

Wear the crown of morning sun

Envious plains weep!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      14 March 2017

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2017

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March 14, 2017 at 1:24 PM

A warm hello from the sun...beautiful

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 14, 2017 at 2:40 PM

Hello Sun! Thank you so much my dear friend, Timotheos!

March 14, 2017 at 12:53 PM

Envious plains weep because there is comparison in life seeing morning sun as crown and gleeful mountaintops wear this. Very metaphorically and wisely you have expressed humor in this beautiful haiku. Very interesting one!...7

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 14, 2017 at 2:37 PM

I know my friend! Thank you so much for your visits. So noble of you!

Richard Lamoureux

March 14, 2017 at 8:22 AM

You are on a roll Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:05 AM

Just trying my good friend, Richard! Thank you!

March 14, 2017 at 7:27 AM

Yet another outstanding haiku, Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:07 AM

Thank you my friend, White Wolf, we might use it ,you know where!

March 14, 2017 at 6:37 AM

The weeping has made the beauty so sweeping ... indeed fascinating ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:09 AM

You always fascinate me, Probir! Thank you so much my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2017 at 5:14 AM

- Lovely haiku my friend Demetrios - a 7 as always - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:11 AM

Delighted to see you once more my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much. Hugs

March 14, 2017 at 5:03 AM

What a joyful picture you've conjured up, in three lines. Well worthy of a 10 Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 15, 2017 at 3:13 AM

I grew up among mountains and the village was on the plain so I just painted it! Thank you dear Maria for your kind visit and comment!

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