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GLEEFUL MOUNTAINTOPS

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 14 MARCH 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Gleeful mountaintops Wear the crown of morning sun Envious plains weep! © Demetrios Trifiatis 14 March 2017

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Tim Smith

Date: 3/14/2017 1:24:00 PM

A warm hello from the sun...beautiful

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/14/2017 2:40:00 PM

Hello Sun! Thank you so much my dear friend, Timotheos!

Pintu Mahakul

Date: 3/14/2017 12:53:00 PM

Envious plains weep because there is comparison in life seeing morning sun as crown and gleeful mountaintops wear this. Very metaphorically and wisely you have expressed humor in this beautiful haiku. Very interesting one!...7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/14/2017 2:37:00 PM

I know my friend! Thank you so much for your visits. So noble of you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/14/2017 8:22:00 AM

You are on a roll Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/15/2017 3:05:00 AM

Just trying my good friend, Richard! Thank you!

White Wolf

Date: 3/14/2017 7:27:00 AM

Yet another outstanding haiku, Demetrios!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/15/2017 3:07:00 AM

Thank you my friend, White Wolf, we might use it ,you know where!

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/14/2017 6:37:00 AM

The weeping has made the beauty so sweeping ... indeed fascinating ...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/15/2017 3:09:00 AM

You always fascinate me, Probir! Thank you so much my friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 5:14:00 AM

- Lovely haiku my friend Demetrios - a 7 as always - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/15/2017 3:11:00 AM

Delighted to see you once more my friend, Anne-Lise! Thank you so much. Hugs

Maria Williams

Date: 3/14/2017 5:03:00 AM

What a joyful picture you've conjured up, in three lines. Well worthy of a 10 Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/15/2017 3:13:00 AM

I grew up among mountains and the village was on the plain so I just painted it! Thank you dear Maria for your kind visit and comment!