Sunrise Tableau

Light beckons this morn-

first rays filter free

tepid sprigs trip up

life left still, sans rest;

worn breaths hesitate

red eyes dissipate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/8/2017 6:44:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/8/2017 3:32:00 PM
congrats on your winning slot with this fascinating work, tim... thanks for joining..
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Date: 11/6/2017 11:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tim.
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Date: 11/6/2017 8:17:00 PM
Well done, Tim, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/6/2017 5:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win Tim..
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Date: 11/6/2017 4:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/6/2017 3:01:00 PM
Coming back with big CONGRATS. I think this scene was picked less often . The piano sure was popular!!
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Date: 11/6/2017 2:03:00 PM
Nicely-penned, Tim - "tepid sprigs trip up" is a great line! Congrats on your win. Kind regards, John.
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Date: 11/5/2017 1:05:00 PM
You captured the image pretty good
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Date: 11/3/2017 5:47:00 AM
Very nice!
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Date: 11/2/2017 9:41:00 AM
What a gorgeous piece.
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:06:00 PM
Loved reading this one. The last line was very clever!!
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Date: 11/1/2017 6:03:00 PM
You paint a picture Tim - such a beautiful poem <3
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:34:00 PM
Beautiful, a painting in words!
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:56:00 PM
A beautiful poem to read today. Thanks for sharing Tim :)
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:20:00 PM
What a fantastic picture you painted with this poem. Really nicely done Tim
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Date: 11/1/2017 2:24:00 PM
Beautifully penned :)
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Date: 11/1/2017 12:45:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful imagery time you captured the image brilliantly:-) hugs Jan xx
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