Caren's Couplet Contest ~ December 5, 2024
Morning sunrise breathed light in filagree burnishing colorful waves across the sea It delicately wove golden threads of lace in dawn's sky while it warmed my face I smiled at the sea's luminous shimmers as it moved in rhythmic dappled glimmers The sun's brilliant shades of topaz and maize seemed to set the sea aflame in a fiery blaze I watched my footsteps stolen from the sand by frothy fingers smuggled as contraband A flock arrived; their squawks heard as a cheer The avian's call to breakfast I could plainly hear Seagulls sang together in a raucous symphony as dawn in glorious beauty, revealed her litany They kept watch for light appearing in the East as the signal it was time for the day's first feast It was such a wondrous morning upon the cape as sunlight artfully painted a stunning seascape
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