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Sunrise Joy






              velvet sunrise beams
              
              nothing, but wellness ahead

              a sand crab, just smiled 




                           02/06/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 1:16 PM
What a fun  Haiku write/picture. Smiles are free. Give one away. Here is a smile. Did you catch it???  Have a blessed day.....................
Romios Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Dearest Paula, I love your idea of smiles!! Plentiful on the West Coast in my city. We even wave to each other in cars in my neighborhood! Such fun. Yes, caught your smile~ here is one for you..Do not drop it! LOL Panagiota
Baker Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Encouraging Haiku! Thanks for the lift! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Romios Avatar
February 7, 2023 at 5:16 PM
So nice to know, it gave you a lift, Bill. Greeet each day with joy,my friend California Pangie xo
Chuuk Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 5:17 PM
Breathtaking :)
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 5:51 PM
Fin! Nice surprise to see you again, , like the second sunrise of my day! Thank you for coming back. May the stars brighten your evening, Pangie xo.
Ibeh Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Quite a delightful haiku, Pangie:-) Thanks for sharing.
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Dear Edward, I delight in your comment, It gives me the needed confidence to try more! I do, thank you, Pangie xo
Eagle Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 2:30 PM
So well written. A joy to read.
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Glad to bring you , joy, Elena! I admire those here, who are masters at the form. Me? A beginner only, Pangie xo
Meadows Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 11:18 AM
A good poem. Well done.
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 12:43 PM
Good- Day, Jeanette. Hope the sun brightens your poetic day! Thank you for your special words! Panagiota xo
Andresen Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 10:26 AM
- Beautiful haiku, Pangie - Here was a beautiful sunset yesterday ... today a bit gray :) - hugs
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 11:00 AM
It’s high noon as I write this and the sun is welcomed for sure.have a huge colorful pinwheel on my deck, swirling in the wind. Heaven, bless you. Pangiexo.
DiMino Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 9:58 AM
Very nice imagery, Pangie; a smile is always a winner! For the Smiler and the reciever. Blessings my friend. Wishing a beautiful, sunny day to all~
Romios Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Joe, I am behind in reading your princely tomes but already commented today. Have been worn out. I am no longer 30 but wish I were,. Beautiful morning are superb! And thank you, it is sunny in Wine Country.)) Pangie xo.
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