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sunrise in your eyes

ocean's blue
turning to molten gold...
a wake up call

in scarlet sky
a blooming flower...
smell of dawn

orange sun
rising behind me...
your eyes' reflection



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Placement: HM; (Nov.2011)

Contest:Sunrise Haiku

Sponsor:Irma Linda

By:kashinath karmakar





Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/19/2011 9:02:00 AM
KAsh, this is another one I wish I saw score higher. well, I was just here all morning trying to forget life for a while. Now off to the gym! Hope your health is good, my friend.
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Date: 11/19/2011 7:19:00 AM
Kash..hey we are on the same page AGAIN! ha ha. Actually, I stole this line from Yasmin. :) . Enjoyed reading this one again...Gwendolen
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:26:00 PM
Congrats Kash on a terrific win for this amazing Haiku of creative perfectiion my friend..luv..
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Date: 11/18/2011 11:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:05:00 AM
Kash many congrats on your win..love the use of colours in all of them..David
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Kash
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Date: 11/18/2011 3:07:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,kash
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Date: 11/18/2011 2:35:00 AM
KASH, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.
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Date: 11/17/2011 9:22:00 AM
These is very sweet, you mixed the beauty of nature with the beauty of your loved one. Sweet :)
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Date: 11/15/2011 9:31:00 PM
Hey, WHAT???? Geez, how did THAT happen?? I was just going off here finally when I got that message from you. I guess for LInda having the hand problem I am top CB, but it won't last long, Kash!! And it's ok by me. Too much pressure. hahaha
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:36:00 PM
Kash, you are getting super duper GOOD with haiku. Keep up the good work, my friend. I hope this scores high. I just love the metaphors in these sunrise poems!!
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Date: 11/15/2011 12:29:00 PM
Great Haikus Kash, what a wonderful way to start a day! I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 11/15/2011 12:22:00 PM
Wow! These haiku are breathtaking, Kash. So beautiful to see the sunrise in your lover's eyes. Outstanding! Best wishes in PD's contest. She's going to love this as much as I do. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:35:00 AM
what a delicious way to portray sunrise, kashi.. i like! :) hugs
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Date: 11/15/2011 8:13:00 AM
Hi Kash..I think you are one of my fav poets...I never know what clever angle you're gonna write from next..I am sure many others on this site feel the same...here's another romantic piece! Man, you're good at this !! Best of luck...Gwendolen
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:37:00 AM
good one.
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Date: 11/15/2011 6:28:00 AM
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