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Sunrise In Your Eyes

ocean's blue turning to molten gold... a wake up call in scarlet sky a blooming flower... smell of dawn orange sun rising behind me... your eyes' reflection ================= Placement: HM; (Nov.2011) Contest:Sunrise Haiku Sponsor:Irma Linda By:kashinath karmakar

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2011 9:02:00 AM

KAsh, this is another one I wish I saw score higher. well, I was just here all morning trying to forget life for a while. Now off to the gym! Hope your health is good, my friend.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/19/2011 7:19:00 AM

Kash..hey we are on the same page AGAIN! ha ha. Actually, I stole this line from Yasmin. :) . Enjoyed reading this one again...Gwendolen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/18/2011 9:26:00 PM

Congrats Kash on a terrific win for this amazing Haiku of creative perfectiion my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunrise Haiku" contest Kash. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 11/18/2011 9:05:00 AM

Kash many congrats on your win..love the use of colours in all of them..David

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/18/2011 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/18/2011 3:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win with this fine entry to P.D.'s Contest,kash

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2011 2:35:00 AM

KASH, congratualtions on your sunrise haiku entry, for my contest. I had a lovely time reading every entry. Take care,..p.d.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/17/2011 9:22:00 AM

These is very sweet, you mixed the beauty of nature with the beauty of your loved one. Sweet :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2011 9:31:00 PM

Hey, WHAT???? Geez, how did THAT happen?? I was just going off here finally when I got that message from you. I guess for LInda having the hand problem I am top CB, but it won't last long, Kash!! And it's ok by me. Too much pressure. hahaha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2011 8:36:00 PM

Kash, you are getting super duper GOOD with haiku. Keep up the good work, my friend. I hope this scores high. I just love the metaphors in these sunrise poems!!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/15/2011 12:29:00 PM

Great Haikus Kash, what a wonderful way to start a day! I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/15/2011 12:22:00 PM

Wow! These haiku are breathtaking, Kash. So beautiful to see the sunrise in your lover's eyes. Outstanding! Best wishes in PD's contest. She's going to love this as much as I do. Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/15/2011 8:35:00 AM

what a delicious way to portray sunrise, kashi.. i like! :) hugs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/15/2011 8:13:00 AM

Hi Kash..I think you are one of my fav poets...I never know what clever angle you're gonna write from next..I am sure many others on this site feel the same...here's another romantic piece! Man, you're good at this !! Best of luck...Gwendolen

Onyebuchi Okonkwo

Date: 11/15/2011 6:37:00 AM

good one.

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2011 6:28:00 AM

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