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Sunrise Dance and Moonlight Dreams

A blossoming evening,serene valleys,meadows and alleys Cottages in distance twinkling little lanterne lights Indigo moon peeping from blue black velevet skies Sparkling diamonds dancing through the night There i lay on fine grain crystals,in my own solitude finding peace with myself,watching the spectacular view of a shooting star in temporarily brilliance,crossing over, acting like a little child,making a wish upon a star just one wish,as i watched Ugin approaching me sommersaulting on white puffed pillowed clouds He had a globe in his hand,a globe where i could see my future a globe in where my one only wish came through. On that night i lay down on golden sands a palm tree the only companion,supporting my back caressing me with passion, embracing me to safety All alone I was ,alone and free,in my long white cashmere dress feeling the breezin of the wind waftin gently through my long brown hair, breathin on my neck,kissing my left cheek,passing to my right flowing under my dress, brushing my pink lips,swifting,in circular movements. That was the night my fingertips found music once again, on silver strings of a spanish guitar,as my bare feet played with coloured corals There i was in my own stolen moments,the universe smiling at me, the angels in radiant chariots flying over,as faries birthed life and performed an orchestra of magical moments. There I was gazing at the mediterranean waves in inward movements, as sailing boats left the shore,reaching far away lands,finding new horizons. There i remained,my thoughts not anchored anymore,rowing to the ends of the sea living in waking dreams,smelling flowers in never ending gardens. There I was,my journey accomplished ,singing the sweetest song of love. There i lay between verses of awake and asleep,hearing birds tweeterin in trees as I watched dawn cover dusk and it was sunrise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/15/2010 8:44:00 AM
Wonderful what you wrote here, Charma! You could paint this picture! Did you ever wrote a novel or short stories? This is another nice piece of Prose Poetry! Thank you for your comments...Here it is again snowing at 4°C....Have a good time!...Gert
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:25:00 AM
I am sorry baby girl I did not know... I will find another.... I have to read yours.....:JP]
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Date: 3/15/2010 6:14:00 AM
"between verses of awake and asleep" says it all! What alovely happening! I think you'd list it as narrative form. Please read Wonderous Night...less involved but on the same wave length with you! Light & Love Little One
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Date: 3/15/2010 4:18:00 AM
Surly more than a dream Charmaine...if you dream this beautiful, you truly need no soul to side with...at least I would not...now desires are truly different...this sort of desire is of mine daily, and I can't seem to quench its thirst, gently though with words at times I at times succede ! *smiles* Beautiful poetry Charmaine !!!! james
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Date: 3/15/2010 3:50:00 AM
As Christopher would say, "Pure Fire!" Loved the descriptions and this was my favorite line, "There i lay between verses of awake and asleep" This one goes to my favs...Raul
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:28:00 PM
wow, is this for the dream contest, Charmaine. I bet it will do well!! this line was my favorite one: That was the night when my fingertips found music . . (such a great way to say it). So glad you enjoyed the mirrored refrain. It was wonderful to be given that challenge here! soupmail.
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:59:00 PM
Sounds like one heck of a dream, can I join you on this mental vacation? I have paid time off....:-]HeHe.... EXCELLENT my friend, as always... Oh, I almost forgot I have just tagged you for a new game going around.. I Am A Poet........Peace....:JP]
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Date: 3/14/2010 4:47:00 PM
Charmaine, this is a wonderful desert island of the mind excursion into the realm of Dreamsville! I like! I like! Tom
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Date: 3/14/2010 3:19:00 PM
Idylic, dreamy, serene and tranquil > oh how i wish to be there >> beautiful poem Charmaine >> James
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Date: 3/14/2010 1:55:00 PM
'I could feel the universe smile at me' :) this is inspirational, I loved it. much love and respect.
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:45:00 PM
What an incredible, creative story, Charma! I feel like I was taken on a vacation with you to this beautiful location. Awesome writing! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/14/2010 12:14:00 PM
Great fantasy that you have written in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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