Sunrise Dance and Moonlight Dreams

A blossoming evening,serene valleys,meadows and alleys
Cottages in  distance twinkling little lanterne lights
Indigo moon peeping from blue black velevet skies
Sparkling diamonds dancing through the night
There i lay on fine grain crystals,in my own solitude
finding peace with myself,watching the spectacular view 
of a shooting star in temporarily brilliance,crossing over,
acting like a little child,making a wish upon a star
just one wish,as i watched Ugin approaching me
sommersaulting on white puffed pillowed clouds
He had a globe in his hand,a globe where i could see my future
a globe in where my one only wish came through.
On that night i lay down on golden sands
a palm tree the only companion,supporting my back
caressing me with passion, embracing me to safety
All alone I was ,alone and free,in my long white cashmere dress
feeling the breezin of the wind waftin gently through my long brown hair,
breathin on my neck,kissing my left cheek,passing to my right
flowing under my dress, brushing my pink lips,swifting,in circular movements.
That was the night my fingertips found music once again,
on silver strings of a spanish guitar,as my bare feet played with coloured corals
There i was in my own stolen moments,the universe smiling at me,
the angels in radiant chariots flying over,as faries birthed life 
and performed an orchestra of magical moments. 
There I was gazing at the mediterranean waves in inward movements,
as sailing boats left the shore,reaching far away lands,finding new horizons.
There i remained,my thoughts not anchored anymore,rowing to the ends of the sea
living in waking dreams,smelling flowers in never ending gardens.
There I was,my journey accomplished ,singing  the sweetest song of love.
There i lay between verses of awake and asleep,hearing birds tweeterin in trees
as I watched dawn cover dusk and it was sunrise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/15/2010 8:44:00 AM
Wonderful what you wrote here, Charma! You could paint this picture! Did you ever wrote a novel or short stories? This is another nice piece of Prose Poetry! Thank you for your comments...Here it is again snowing at 4°C....Have a good time!...Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2010 6:25:00 AM
I am sorry baby girl I did not know... I will find another.... I have to read yours.....:JP]
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2010 6:14:00 AM
"between verses of awake and asleep" says it all! What alovely happening! I think you'd list it as narrative form. Please read Wonderous Night...less involved but on the same wave length with you! Light & Love Little One
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2010 4:18:00 AM
Surly more than a dream Charmaine...if you dream this beautiful, you truly need no soul to side with...at least I would not...now desires are truly different...this sort of desire is of mine daily, and I can't seem to quench its thirst, gently though with words at times I at times succede ! *smiles* Beautiful poetry Charmaine !!!! james
Login to Reply
Date: 3/15/2010 3:50:00 AM
As Christopher would say, "Pure Fire!" Loved the descriptions and this was my favorite line, "There i lay between verses of awake and asleep" This one goes to my favs...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 10:28:00 PM
wow, is this for the dream contest, Charmaine. I bet it will do well!! this line was my favorite one: That was the night when my fingertips found music . . (such a great way to say it). So glad you enjoyed the mirrored refrain. It was wonderful to be given that challenge here! soupmail.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 5:59:00 PM
Sounds like one heck of a dream, can I join you on this mental vacation? I have paid time off....:-]HeHe.... EXCELLENT my friend, as always... Oh, I almost forgot I have just tagged you for a new game going around.. I Am A Poet........Peace....:JP]
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 4:47:00 PM
Charmaine, this is a wonderful desert island of the mind excursion into the realm of Dreamsville! I like! I like! Tom
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 3:19:00 PM
Idylic, dreamy, serene and tranquil > oh how i wish to be there >> beautiful poem Charmaine >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 1:55:00 PM
'I could feel the universe smile at me' :) this is inspirational, I loved it. much love and respect.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 12:45:00 PM
What an incredible, creative story, Charma! I feel like I was taken on a vacation with you to this beautiful location. Awesome writing! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 3/14/2010 12:14:00 PM
Great fantasy that you have written in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad