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Sunrise Aglow

mellow yellow sky
glistens upon morning dew
hummingbird flutters



Entry: Sunrise Haiku Contest
Sponsor P.D.
Written: 11/17/2011
12th Place Winner

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Elizabeth Wesley

January 2, 2012 at 7:12 PM

Love it Carol, the hummingbird provides such magic.

Black Eyed Susan

November 28, 2011 at 9:45 AM

beautiful image! congrats on your win in pd's contest :)

Kash Poet

November 27, 2011 at 7:14 AM

Wonderful haiku here Carol.Congratulations on your win.Thanks for all your congrats messages at my poems.

Jack Horne

November 24, 2011 at 2:24 PM

Beautiful haiku, Carol. A very happy Thanksgiving to you, my friend : )

Davin Math

November 24, 2011 at 12:34 AM

That's awesome...well done Carol!

Matthew Anish

November 23, 2011 at 5:05 PM

Do you remember the song "Mellow Yellow" by Donovan? Fine haiku! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Robert A. Dufresne

November 23, 2011 at 4:30 PM

tis a beauty Carol! congratulations on your fine win here in the contest.

George Aul

November 23, 2011 at 2:47 PM

A beautiful picture...........George

Greg Stanley

November 20, 2011 at 10:38 PM

Very nice imagery - and a joy to read. Thanks for posting. Greg S.

James Fraser

November 20, 2011 at 12:54 PM

A joy to view through the window Carol. Isn't it amazing what simple words can paint, kinda terrific to be honest. Have a lovely Sunday Carol :)

Nathan D.

November 20, 2011 at 10:44 AM

cool haiku makes me thirsty too peace to you and yours

Jack Horne

November 19, 2011 at 2:22 PM

Beautiful haiku, Carol. Many congrats on all your wins and thanks, I enjoyed your contest : )

Andrea Dietrich

November 18, 2011 at 11:31 PM

this was a glowing little gem. Congrats on the win. LUv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2011 at 9:25 PM

Congrats Carol on a wonderful win for this creative perfection Haiku for PD luv..

Lizzie Treetop

November 18, 2011 at 8:43 PM

Oh Carol what a lovely day it will be! Hug Lizzie

Carolyn Devonshire

November 18, 2011 at 6:51 PM

Such a delightful haiku, Carol. Love the image of the hummingbird fluttering. Congratulations on you win in the contest. Have a happy Thanksgiving, hon. Love, Carolyn