Sunrise

As I beheld the lovely sunrise It was like viewing a beautiful surprise It was so mesmerizing and captivating And utterly breathtaking I got swept up in it's beauty As though it was my duty I didn't want the moment to end It was a great start to my weekend Alexis Y. 5-9-17

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 5/14/2017 3:54:00 PM

Hi Alexis, what a beautiful sunrise, what feelings you express before us. The emotions of seeing this God given sight. Your beautiful words do sing out the glory of the rising sun. A lovely sight to share Alexis. Has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/13/2017 5:57:00 AM

Good Morning Alexis. This is lovely and gentle poetry. You deliver tranquility and beauty. May the sun always rise. Well done entirely. Enjoy the weekend.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/11/2017 2:27:00 PM

gently stunning, alexis... yes to this!.. huggs

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/10/2017 2:05:00 PM

A lovely way to feel this poem reveals, Alexis. Such a refreshing poem. A 7! Love always.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/9/2017 10:28:00 PM

Very uplifting!!!! :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/9/2017 8:10:00 PM

Sounds delightful... Have a great week Alexis :)

White Wolf

Date: 5/9/2017 6:43:00 PM

I love succinct poetry such as this beautiful example, Alexis! A lovely entry for a sunny day as today!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/9/2017 5:31:00 PM

What a glorious way to start the weekend:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 5/9/2017 5:00:00 PM

No better way to start any day of the week than with a beautiful sunrise. Your poem could be a sunrise my friend, it is that beautiful and sure made me smile. :)