Alexis Y. Poet Couplet

Sunrise

As I beheld the lovely sunrise 
It was like viewing a beautiful surprise

It was so mesmerizing and captivating 
And utterly breathtaking 

I got swept up in it's beauty 
As though it was my duty

I didn't want the moment to end
It was a great start to my weekend





Alexis Y.
5-9-17

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Vladislav Raven May 14, 2017 at 3:54 PM Hi Alexis, what a beautiful sunrise, what feelings you express before us. The emotions of seeing this God given sight. Your beautiful words do sing out the glory of the rising sun. A lovely sight to share Alexis. Has to be a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX

Lisa Ricci May 13, 2017 at 5:57 AM Good Morning Alexis. This is lovely and gentle poetry. You deliver tranquility and beauty. May the sun always rise. Well done entirely. Enjoy the weekend.

Nette Onclaud May 11, 2017 at 2:27 PM gently stunning, alexis... yes to this!.. huggs

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 10, 2017 at 2:05 PM A lovely way to feel this poem reveals, Alexis. Such a refreshing poem. A 7! Love always.

Arthur Vaso May 9, 2017 at 10:28 PM Very uplifting!!!! :)

Akkina Downing May 9, 2017 at 8:10 PM Sounds delightful... Have a great week Alexis :)

White Wolf May 9, 2017 at 6:43 PM I love succinct poetry such as this beautiful example, Alexis! A lovely entry for a sunny day as today!

Jan Allison May 9, 2017 at 5:31 PM What a glorious way to start the weekend:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green May 9, 2017 at 5:00 PM No better way to start any day of the week than with a beautiful sunrise. Your poem could be a sunrise my friend, it is that beautiful and sure made me smile. :)