Sunrise

It is not in the east
That the sun rises, for me, my love

But

In the unfathomed beauty of your
Enchanting soul! 
 

© Demetrios Trifiatis
    04 OCTOBER 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Yvonne Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Wow another T-Shirt. This is brilliant. Sorry I don't mean to be a cheerleader but I am going to fav this one too.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Another huge, THANK YOU, mon ami, Maurice! Keep one for me!
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:19 PM
wow, this is a great little romantic poem!
Trifiatis Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 3:03 PM
Thank you my, dear Andrea, for your visit and gracious comment! A little poem for an immense love!Ha-ha!
Smith Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:07 AM
How lovely of a thought my friend...It does brighten up the day.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 3:05 PM
It could, under the right circumstances, dear Tim, brighten up a whole life! Thank you so much for appreciating it!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:41 AM
nice one pal thumbs up on this one
Trifiatis Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:56 AM
Thank you my friend, Liam! You so kind!
Gorelick Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:40 PM
Oh, bliss...such a lovely piece. BG
Trifiatis Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:56 AM
Barbara, my dear, how delighted I am to receive your visit and your kind comment! Thank you!
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 3:01 PM
Simply stunning Demetrios - so few words say so much - its a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:06 PM
:-) hugs back xxx
Trifiatis Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:03 PM
My dear, Jan, love doesn't need many words to express itself. A kiss speaks volumes! Thank you so much for your delightful visit and generous comment! Now that I know what I knew from the beginning, I send you many hugs and xxxx without hesitations! Ha-ha!
Chircop Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 2:51 PM
You are a very romantic man Demetrios.You express such a beauty in few words.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:07 PM
Charmaine, how beautiful to receive your visit and heartfelt comment. Thank you so much! I use few words for I wish my hand to be free to hold her hand as soon as possible!
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