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Sunrise

Crawl out of bed in the early morning squint towards the window Brilliant colors shower down orange pink red Piercing to dark sky changing it to the dawn of a new day. As mom is driving home later that evening I look out of the car window and see the sun sinking below the tops of the trees and this time the colors are different deeper reds stronger oranges and a faint, subtle hint of a purplish indigo I watch the trees swallow the sun and wonder if tomorrow will bring something new ~Marie Viloria~ 7th place in Sunrise -- Verses -- Sunset

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/30/2011 3:34:00 PM
Sometimes a small event in life brings us to so deep thought..Enjoyed ..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/26/2011 6:40:00 PM
Marie, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/26/2011 12:39:00 PM
Many Congrats Marie....
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Date: 5/26/2011 3:40:00 AM
Many congrats Marie on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/25/2011 6:27:00 PM
Congrats Marie on your wonderful win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant entry.. luv.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 5/25/2011 5:03:00 PM
The new day will always bring something new and this is a delightful descriptive piece. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/25/2011 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations onn the win in the contest of HG, Marie
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Date: 5/25/2011 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:03:00 AM
Dear Marie, Thank-YOU for Supporting My Contest "Sunrise - Verses - Sunset" I do have a request Change YOUR Form I will not except I do not know as a Form Also put YOUR name on the POEM I will read this again in a Day or two, If YOU have made the changes I will move YOU to round 2 With LOVE ALWAYS, YOUR Liege... HG
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Date: 4/26/2011 3:28:00 PM
wonderful poetry! I am confused if we are to just pick one or the other or if we may write of both as you did. I had hoped to do both. Guess i will contact the sponsor since he says to pick one or the other. I hope your way is acceptable because I think it deserves a good win.
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