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Sunrise service A gathering of sparrows Buddha draped in snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 1/23/2024 5:59:00 AM
Oh, this is a beautiful haiku, there's a unique sense of soothe here, especially with sunrise, sparrows and the imagery of "Buddha draped in snow".. Ahh, very gorgeous.. Wonderfully crafted & I loved reading this..
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Date: 1/22/2024 6:02:00 PM
This poem gives an image of serenity. I felt relaxation as I read it.
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Date: 1/22/2024 8:59:00 AM
this was a splendid Haiku...I especially liked the last line...creative with a bit of depth.
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