Jenna Logan Poet Rictameter

Sunrise

Sunrise
Warm amber rays
Greet me with morning light
Softly peeking through my window
A welcome voyeur is this peeping Tom
Who wakens me in time to hear
sweet trilling of songbirds
Plaudits to the
Sunrise


July 17, 2022
Radical Rictameter Contest
Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger

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Kim Rodrigues August 7, 2022 at 6:59 AM Love this, Jenna! A welcome voyeur is this peeping Tom - what a cool way to see this!

Paula Goldsmith August 5, 2022 at 9:40 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Sunrise" is a beautiful write/picture. I wish I had the picture. Have a blessed day writing away....................... Jenna Logan August 5, 2022 at 1:03 PM Thanks, Paula. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Linda Alice Fowler August 5, 2022 at 5:31 AM Great imagery, great win. Congratulations Jenna! Linda Jenna Logan August 5, 2022 at 5:33 AM Thanks a lot, Linda.

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2022 at 7:05 PM this sure is lovely, Jenna. Congrats on a well deserved win. Jenna Logan August 5, 2022 at 3:47 AM Thanks, Andrea. I almost forgot I'd written for this contest.

Jeff Kyser July 17, 2022 at 8:35 PM Yup, that seems what a rictameter ought to sound like, very nice read Jenna Logan July 18, 2022 at 3:37 PM Hey Jeff. Thanks for your approving comments ;)

Gordon Mcconnell July 17, 2022 at 12:42 PM Such a beautiful sunrise piece Jenna matching with the image itself. Blessings always,Gordon Jenna Logan July 17, 2022 at 1:42 PM Thanks for liking these lines, Gordon.

Tom Cunningham July 17, 2022 at 10:45 AM A lovely time of day Jenna,even though I'm now retired I still wake early to great the morn. Tom PS, hope you didn't think it's me knocking your window lol Jenna Logan July 17, 2022 at 1:42 PM It truly is, Tom. LOL Knock on my window and we'll share the sunrise.

L Milton Hankins July 17, 2022 at 8:53 AM Another outstanding piece from the pen of Jenna Logan! I really like this. I also like how it is perfectly shaped, as it should be. Jenna Logan July 17, 2022 at 10:42 AM Thank you very much for both kind comments, Milt. I've never written in this form, but it was fun.