Sunrise

the gentle arms of morning rise ~ lifting the gauzy shade of night









Date: May 30, 2022
For: Morning Monoku Poetry Contest
Sponsored  by: Michelle Faulkner
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Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 1:26 PM
Reads like a very good contender to me. Way to go. It is so amazing to see the way a day or those days start and then once again to see the end. I appreciate your visit. Sara
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Thank you Sara~glad you enjoyed it! :)Paulette
Wolf Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Love both images, Paulette, especially the morning's. Good morning sunshine and blue skies, gw
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Thank you Gershon~there is nothing more beautiful to awaken to the gently rise of the sun, shedding light through the dawns light. :)Paulette
Allison Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 2:26 PM
absolutely delightful Paulette cc
Calasibetta Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Thank you Jan~I appreciate your stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Mcconnell Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 10:57 AM
Lovely piece of brevity penned here Paulette, hope all is well, blessings,Gordon
Calasibetta Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Gordon~and I hope all is well with you also. :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Nice entry for the contest, Paulette. Good luck! Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:36 AM
Nothing like a magnificent sunrise to inspire! :)Paulette
DiMino Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Seeing the sunrise is a blessing. Every day a miracle. Well said.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Indeed! Thanks for stopping by to visit. Happy Memorial Day! :)Paulette
Hankins Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Ah, Paulette, I like this one a lot. I love the idea of letting in the light. I see a winner here.
Calasibetta Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Milton~glad you enjoy “Sunrise”….an amazing sight. :)Paulette
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 10:02 AM
Love the metaphors Paulette, best of luck in the contest. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom
Calasibetta Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Tom~glad you enjoyed the metaphors of “Sunrise”…. :)Paulette
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