Terry L. Allen Poet Prose Poetry

Sunny Days

The Son burst upon my days
taking away the mist and haze
of times less bright.

Now my spirits climb
with anticipation of all tomorrows.
Empty spaces now fill 
as my heart stands still.

Lungs aftaid to breathe
in this illumination.
My heart does feed.

Words no longer on deaf ears fall.
The Son makes translucent my wall.
As day ends and night begins
a velvet warmth now sets in
and tomorrow holds the promise
of sun filled days.


I wrote this poem in 2003

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Terry O'Leary August 4, 2012 at 1:17 PM Terry, this is a wonderful poem! I'm glad to see you are back to PS (at least temporarily...???) I hope you'll be posting some new 'stuff'!!! Huggs, Terry (And thanks for you're kind comments and reviews!!!) Terry L. Allen August 4, 2012 at 1:32 PM I am having to pester friends to use their computers these days which makes it hard to get anything done. My mind has been more on survival of late than writing poetry.

Kash Poet May 12, 2012 at 11:02 AM Revisiting this one.Thanks for your explanation. Terry L. Allen May 12, 2012 at 7:23 PM I hope with the explination that things are clearer. Huggs TLee

Kash Poet May 12, 2012 at 4:05 AM A beautiful poem Terry.Nicely expressed feelings.Did you mean SUN or SON here.Your title is SUNNY. But you have written SON in the poem.I have returned your soupmail. Terry L. Allen May 12, 2012 at 5:38 AM With Jesus in my life (Son) then my days are sunny. Now that the Son has burst upon my life it has inproved my life. I now hear his words and the wall that was once a part of my life is gone. Because of that all tomorrows promise to be sunny days. I didn't realize that I was being that obscure. Huggs TLee

John Rhinem May 12, 2012 at 1:22 AM Ps. Smile ˜ Thanks For The Kind Visit * Love Always; John!:) ˜ Terry L. Allen May 13, 2012 at 9:02 PM Hmmmm Twice in one day. We just have to stop meeting like this John (smile) people will talk. lol TLee

John Rhinem May 11, 2012 at 11:40 AM Smile ~ Very beautiful in both hope and inspiration, my dear precious and beautiful Terry * The pleasant flowing stream of its words reflects these dreams as life should and one day shall be ~ Hard to sustain and thus we fight to hold truth tightly amid, this light ~ Thank you for your kind visit; very lovely ~ My love, always; John!:) ~ Terry L. Allen May 13, 2012 at 8:58 PM Thank you John for you kind visit and loving words. Huggs TLee.

David Williams May 8, 2012 at 7:46 AM Terry, we each find our own way to express through our words of poetry, this is a good way to do it, well done and thanks for your comments..David Terry L. Allen May 8, 2012 at 2:19 PM Dave I am sending you a soup mail . Terry L. Allen May 8, 2012 at 8:18 AM Thank you I am not trained or even self taught in the various forms of writing poetry and am just learning and expect that I have and will make mistakes as I go along. Thank you for your kind review. TLee