SUNNY DAY

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08/09/24

Three stanzas, nine syllabus for each line

Rhyming scheme : aaa ; bbb ; ccc .

Watch kaleidoscope of butterflies on the bright sunny day at sunrise :: Future good fortune to emphasize. Restless wings, butterflies to flutter. Bees groan among flowers in cluster . Blowing breeze kissing blossoms faster. Up above clear cerulean sky Eager egrets feel easy to fly. Open-air romance ! Lovers to try .

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Gary Radice

Date: 8/9/2024 1:07:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem Alisha and was fascinated by the rhyme scheme you used here. I just had to Google it and it’s known as a triplet. Makes sense I guess. I learnt something new today thanks to your poem which, I must add, has a lovely calmness about it. And as I’m writing this I’ve just noticed in your notes that each line has 9 syllables as well. Nice one! Thanks for sharing! Cheers - Gary

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/10/2024 6:35:00 AM

Thanks for visit and appreciation. Blessings