Sunlit Hair

     the breeze lifted her sunlit hair
        danced to and fro a moment there

     her flowery skirt swayed
        to a melody no orchestra played
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July 1, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Simply beautiful BB...love the last line!! Debx
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July 1, 2025 at 12:21 PM
Your "Sunlit Hair" was a fun read. Have a fun day writing away............
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