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Sunlight's Sundown

sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown
                       magical music measures each step kept
                             the waters glow in a glorious golden crown
                                  sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown
                                      so stars can surprise as twilight's evening gown
                        and the final majestic moments are wept
                             sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown


7-9-2020
Brian's contest   1st place

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Howard Kerr Date: 7/27/2020 1:35:00 AM Magnificent imagery, Jeanne. First rate narrative. Congrats on win. Howard Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 7/14/2020 11:03:00 PM Delicate as sunshine. Love the carefully crafted alliteration. It really flows, Jeanne. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/14/2020 3:43:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 7/12/2020 2:10:00 PM There is such awesome imagery in this WINNING poem, Jeanne! Janice Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/13/2020 10:35:00 AM Hi Janice. thanks for reading and commenting. Jeanne

Bryan Norton Date: 7/12/2020 11:17:00 AM Congrats, Jeanne. I thought your poem was majestic. My favorite line: the waters glow in a glorious golden crown Just beautiful! Best wishes,B Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/13/2020 10:33:00 AM Hey Bryan thanks so much. Jeanne

JCB Brul Date: 7/12/2020 12:57:00 AM Singing as I read this melodious poem. Lovely and soothing imagery! A fave for me. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/13/2020 10:34:00 AM I went back and tried to sing it...worked pretty good I must say. Thank you for the fav! :D

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/10/2020 4:54:00 PM Your alliterative write is filled with such lovely imagery Jeanne Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/10/2020 5:57:00 PM It was fun how that just came to be as if the words themselves knew they went in that order. :D xoxo

Heidi Sands Date: 7/10/2020 10:04:00 AM Absolutely beautiful Jeanne! I enjoyed this :) Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/10/2020 5:58:00 PM simplicity is sometimes best and the triolet can work so well for that. thanks Heidi.