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Sunlight's Sundown

sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown magical music measures each step kept the waters glow in a glorious golden crown sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown so stars can surprise as twilight's evening gown and the final majestic moments are wept sunlight’s stairway shimmers just at sundown 7-9-2020 Brian's contest 1st place

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Howard Kerr
Date: 7/27/2020 1:35:00 AM
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Magnificent imagery, Jeanne. First rate narrative. Congrats on win. Howard
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 7/14/2020 11:03:00 PM
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Delicate as sunshine. Love the carefully crafted alliteration. It really flows, Jeanne. Congratulations on your win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/14/2020 3:43:00 PM
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Beautiful!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/12/2020 2:10:00 PM
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There is such awesome imagery in this WINNING poem, Jeanne! Janice
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/13/2020 10:35:00 AM
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Hi Janice. thanks for reading and commenting. Jeanne
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Bryan Norton
Date: 7/12/2020 11:17:00 AM
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Congrats, Jeanne. I thought your poem was majestic. My favorite line: the waters glow in a glorious golden crown Just beautiful! Best wishes,B
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/13/2020 10:33:00 AM
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Hey Bryan thanks so much. Jeanne
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Jcb Brul
Date: 7/12/2020 12:57:00 AM
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Singing as I read this melodious poem. Lovely and soothing imagery! A fave for me.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/13/2020 10:34:00 AM
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I went back and tried to sing it...worked pretty good I must say. Thank you for the fav! :D
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/10/2020 4:54:00 PM
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Your alliterative write is filled with such lovely imagery Jeanne
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/10/2020 5:57:00 PM
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It was fun how that just came to be as if the words themselves knew they went in that order. :D xoxo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/10/2020 10:04:00 AM
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Absolutely beautiful Jeanne! I enjoyed this :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/10/2020 5:58:00 PM
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simplicity is sometimes best and the triolet can work so well for that. thanks Heidi.

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