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Sunlight Plays With Color

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The transformation is magical don't you agree..Sara

The sun strikes the Red Maple, Crepe Myrtle Tree
Glorious color is the reward of the onlooker
Bewitchment by the quick change engages fantasy
Of the sage who has the role of a caretaker

Sunlight passes through common broomsage
Its color purple fills me with excitement
The light component does my mind assuage
Light accelerates color with enlightenment

Unfinished work...

Sara

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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Mohammad Yamin Date: 10/30/2011 7:39:00 PM Wonderful imagery, Sara. Very well done. Is there anything more to say? There seems hardly any need. Thank you for giving me the joy of reading your comments on my poem I Love You. -Mohammad Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 10/30/2011 4:31:00 PM Yes Sara, Colors creeping through the mind, red n crepe n other kinds, the sage 'caretaker' enlightens till, color flowing void does fill, one other time.... Login to Reply

Rosalyn Lampkin Date: 10/30/2011 1:53:00 PM A wonderful inking....Unfinished work...NOT SO!!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/29/2011 11:15:00 AM sweetly penned Sara.. a perfect visual with that sun strike across the trees .. u have a flare for Nature in all it's splendor and glory my friend.. hope all is well ..how is doggie? Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/29/2011 9:55:00 AM not lowly.....highly needed.....caretaker. encourager of sickly. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 10/29/2011 12:35:00 AM thank you for the comment on "only if" Sara, you are right the title dosen't do justice to the theme..(however it was the best i could think of at the "time"..? ha ha can you suggest a better one.? if so mail me and i will look at ammending it..yours Joe. Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 10/28/2011 7:31:00 PM bed maker peers from the window, at the red and the brown leaves she sees, mundane may it seem, just part of the scheme, and life revolves around thee... Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 10/28/2011 4:39:00 PM OH.! and real great discriptions of the scenery.. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 10/28/2011 4:37:00 PM Now i agree with all but the last line Sara, apart from that it was alright...however in my estimation you are a keen poet, and i am as of now relieving you of the other title:) besides it takes soo long, all that sawing and turning.! and you are never going to compete with the mass market..! only joking) thank you for the comment. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/28/2011 3:28:00 PM Yes, such things can fuel the imagination indeed - lovely write, Sara. I love the last line : ) Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 10/28/2011 2:50:00 PM * “As An Enchanting Postcard * I Somehow Your Loveliness, My Dear Beautiful Sara * Which In Turn Paints Its Moment & Image Even Splendorous * Bewitched In Spellbound By The Beauty of Nature & The Beauty of Your Eyes * Luv * Sarah.” * Login to Reply