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Sunlight of Gold

Sunlight of gold Dancing on the water Of the slow paced River where swans Swim, get nourished Play, where the swans Form a heart when Their heads touch External sign of love Mated for entire life If one dies the other Despairs, grief stricken May love again But possibly die from grief Committed love contained Why can't people watch birds And do the same

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 1/24/2010 10:00:00 AM

mated for entire life. some really are bonded as one and its scary to think about one losing the other. thanks for the thoughts in this great poem you wrote.<: -Always Lynette

Kim Hilliker

Date: 1/15/2010 2:19:00 PM

Beautiful write, Sara! Wouldn't it be great if we learned from them rather than having disposable relationships?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/13/2010 9:02:00 AM

nice one mom, I like it!!

John Freeman

Date: 1/10/2010 11:51:00 AM

Unfortunately not all people, being lost in their wilderness minds, can see the simplistic power of their own Love's inner being, as you, your self. As you can see Love in nature. Keep this depth of innocent perception Sara, it is of the power of your Love. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/10/2010 6:03:00 AM

Beautiful poem with beauty of swan like birds and their deep love for each other. What a lovely Poem to tell something which we can learn these birds. Great write. Thanks for lovely reading. I have placed a new Long love story poem the Boatman's Song 1to7 and more. Hope you would like it and let me have your valuable comments. With best wishes and love Ravindra

Brian Strand

Date: 1/10/2010 12:22:00 AM

Keep sprinkling this place with your sunlight Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2010 6:53:00 PM

So nice, Sara. I did hear about swans. they mate for life, right? You did well comparing them to us (or should I say CONTRASTing them to us. ) we need to do the same, as you eloquently stated.Luv, andrea

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 1/9/2010 12:12:00 PM

Profound write here Sara and I agree humans could learn a few things from the animal kingdom about committed love and total loyalty! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my poetry. Many thanks too for your always kind comments. All is so very truly appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/9/2010 10:46:00 AM

We could learn so much from nature, if we are willing to humble ourselves long enough. Nicely written, Sara. ~ Carrie

Jared Pickett

Date: 1/9/2010 8:33:00 AM

The tales of love and infatuation has inspired a new poem.... Excellent write Sara.....:JP]

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2010 8:30:00 AM

My sentiments, exactly, Sara! Even the animals know what loyalty and devotion is. They know instinctively that there is order in the universe-we humans with all our gifts-free will, intelligence, etc., fail to grasp it and even when we do, we still "choose" to believe the lie that the world began out of chaos-"one big bang". We're disloyal, even to the one person who has given their all to us for years! Sorry, for the preaching!! Great write! Peace, Audrey

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/9/2010 8:06:00 AM

Awesome Sara. i've often thought the same about Sand Cranes. They also mate for life. Thanks for this great thoughtful poem. Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/9/2010 7:55:00 AM

Amazing image of the heart that's formed by the profiles of the swans, Sara. Very nicely written poem about creatures who mated for life! If you find out why people can't do the same, please share this with us. Great poem! Love, Carolyn (And thanks for your kind words; I'm doing better now.)