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Sunlight Formed a Rainbow After the Rain

water douse earth life 
melting ice push penguins end
shake from head to tail


3/5/2018


Global warming;
Melting ice could push penguins to extinction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 11:30 AM
Your haiku is an eye opener, Eve. Unless proper action is taken penguins and other creatures will pay a high price. Hugs // paul
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Stark vision of impending doom...Let's hope Plan B kicks in soon! :) gw
Thomas Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:08 PM
It really could. Great Haiku Eve!
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 12:03 PM
Fine Haiku Eve, so sad...
One Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 6:03 AM
I love penguins!!! i hope they do not get extinct! Great haiku.
Sathasivam Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 4:39 AM
Sad to hear. You have penned well. Thanks for sharing it.
Wigley Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 9:36 PM
To paraphrase Joni Mitchell, we won't know what we've got till it's gone. Toching little Haiku, Eve. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Sad plight for penguins. Well done, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 5:25 PM
those poor penguins. A creative take on the theme, Eve. Did you see March of the Penguins? I loved that movie.
Cunningham Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Man will destroy mankind and all other living things, we've become too clever for our own good. Great haiku Eve.
Blanca Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 4:35 PM
There are those who don't believe in "global warming" How sad.
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