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Sunlight and Rainstorm

Sunlight and Rainstorms

Clear sunlight and rainstorms play games of tag
 As bluebirds perch on rainbows

3-1-23
Contest: A New Crystalline
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Gary Radice

March 16, 2023 at 8:37 AM

Your Crystalline is very pleasing to the ear and mind's eye Sam. Lovely! Judy Garland's "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" came into my head. Cheers - Gary

Sam Kauffman

March 16, 2023 at 9:39 AM

Thank you so much Gary. That is the image that came into my mind when writing this crystalline. You are the first to see the musical reference! Had fun with this one. So grateful for your feedback that is always so encouraging! All the best! Cheers! Let's lift a glass to rainbows and bluebirds!!

Sara Kendrick

March 14, 2023 at 3:41 AM

Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Good to see it on the winners' list. Sara

Sam Kauffman

March 14, 2023 at 12:10 PM

Thank you Sara! This was such fun to imagine. An honor to be on the winners list with so many wonderful poems. Prayers and blessings!

Tania Kitchin

March 13, 2023 at 4:07 PM

Sam, beautiful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Sam Kauffman

March 14, 2023 at 12:09 PM

Such a fun contest, Tania! Thank you for your feedback and your placement. An honor to be on the winners list among so many wonderful poems. Blessings of bright spring rainbows to you.

Kim Rodrigues

March 13, 2023 at 9:45 AM

Great imagery! Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

March 13, 2023 at 12:45 PM

This was fun to imagine! Thank you for your note of congratulations and delightful feedback, Kim. Blessings of rainbows to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 13, 2023 at 5:40 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Sam :) - hugs

Sam Kauffman

March 13, 2023 at 12:44 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Sending you hugs and blessings of rainbows!

Swetha Vangaveti

March 7, 2023 at 11:03 AM

Bluebirds perching on rainbows is beautiful to visualise!!

Sam Kauffman

March 13, 2023 at 12:42 PM

Thank you so much Swetha! Had fun with this image. All the best!

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2023 at 10:52 PM

Sweet little verse,Sam.

Sam Kauffman

March 7, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Thank you so much Andrea! Had fun with this one! Blessings!

Joanna Daniel

March 3, 2023 at 10:40 PM

Lovely, Sam, what an image of playing tag! And then bluebirds perching on rainbows, beautiful:)

Sam Kauffman

March 7, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Thank you so much Jo! Late winter in our area is always full of surprises, sudden cloudbursts and whimsy! This was such fun to imagine! Sending you blessings of bluebirds and rainbows!

Eve Roper

March 2, 2023 at 11:05 AM

Great verse, Sam. Blessings friend

Sam Kauffman

March 2, 2023 at 11:18 AM

Thank you so much Eve! Late winter does have a whimsical side for me. I think of this time of year as rainbow season in our area - a time of sun and storm. Over the past two days I have seen several rainbows. They always remind me of God's promise to Noah. Blessings of rainbows to you my friend!