Sunlight and Rainstorm

Sunlight and Rainstorms

Clear sunlight and rainstorms play games of tag
 As bluebirds perch on rainbows

3-1-23
Contest: A New Crystalline
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 3/16/2023 8:37:00 AM
Your Crystalline is very pleasing to the ear and mind's eye Sam. Lovely! Judy Garland's "Somewhere Over The Rainbow" came into my head. Cheers - Gary
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/16/2023 9:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Gary. That is the image that came into my mind when writing this crystalline. You are the first to see the musical reference! Had fun with this one. So grateful for your feedback that is always so encouraging! All the best! Cheers! Let's lift a glass to rainbows and bluebirds!!
Date: 3/14/2023 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Good to see it on the winners' list. Sara
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/14/2023 12:10:00 PM
Thank you Sara! This was such fun to imagine. An honor to be on the winners list with so many wonderful poems. Prayers and blessings!
Date: 3/13/2023 4:07:00 PM
Sam, beautiful imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/14/2023 12:09:00 PM
Such a fun contest, Tania! Thank you for your feedback and your placement. An honor to be on the winners list among so many wonderful poems. Blessings of bright spring rainbows to you.
Date: 3/13/2023 9:45:00 AM
Great imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/13/2023 12:45:00 PM
This was fun to imagine! Thank you for your note of congratulations and delightful feedback, Kim. Blessings of rainbows to you!
Date: 3/13/2023 5:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Sam :) - hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/13/2023 12:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Sending you hugs and blessings of rainbows!
Date: 3/7/2023 11:03:00 AM
Bluebirds perching on rainbows is beautiful to visualise!!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/13/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Swetha! Had fun with this image. All the best!
Date: 3/4/2023 10:52:00 PM
Sweet little verse,Sam.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2023 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea! Had fun with this one! Blessings!
Date: 3/3/2023 10:40:00 PM
Lovely, Sam, what an image of playing tag! And then bluebirds perching on rainbows, beautiful:)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/7/2023 11:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Jo! Late winter in our area is always full of surprises, sudden cloudbursts and whimsy! This was such fun to imagine! Sending you blessings of bluebirds and rainbows!
Date: 3/2/2023 11:05:00 AM
Great verse, Sam. Blessings friend
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/2/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve! Late winter does have a whimsical side for me. I think of this time of year as rainbow season in our area - a time of sun and storm. Over the past two days I have seen several rainbows. They always remind me of God's promise to Noah. Blessings of rainbows to you my friend!
Date: 3/2/2023 8:01:00 AM
- This one was lovely, Sam :) - hugs
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/2/2023 10:43:00 AM
Hi Anne-Lise! Thank you! I loved the theme. Made me think of the playfulness of spring! Blessings and a warm hug!
Date: 3/1/2023 4:55:00 PM
Oh so lovely, especially 'bluebirds perch on rainbows' - love that image :)
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Date: 3/2/2023 10:42:00 AM
Hi Michelle! Thank you so much! Had fun with that image. I always appreciate your wonderful feedback! You have such a keen poetic eye! Blessings!
Date: 3/1/2023 1:01:00 PM
Great, fun poem Sam :)
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Date: 3/2/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi! Just had to have a little fun with Mother Nature! Sending you continued prayers and blessings!
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