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Sunlight Moonlight

Sunlight
dazzling, blinding
quenching, dousing, drenching
the sun's rays, a moonlight flower
walking, playing, breathing
illuminated, moonlit
Moonlight

12.10.16


Second Place
"Sunrise & Sunset"
by Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 2:58:00 PM

Ah - very clever diamante. Well done and congrats on your winning poem, Moon Flower.

Moon Flower
Date: 5/4/2018 8:32:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/19/2018 7:41:00 PM

Your poem is truly beautiful and expressive Moon Flower. Your imagery is brilliant and enchanting and your poem on your card is stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan

Moon Flower
Date: 2/22/2018 10:02:00 PM

Thank you for the kind words, Susan. :)

Silent One

Date: 2/18/2018 12:24:00 PM

An excellent diamnte... congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Moon Flower
Date: 2/18/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you, Silent O.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/18/2018 11:54:00 AM

- A piece of art from nature and your pen ... Congratulations, Moon Flower :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman

Date: 11/8/2017 3:19:00 AM

Hi Moon Flower, A lovely yin/yang write. My Moon Flowers finally bloomed this year. It's a beautiful vine with heart shaped leaves and impressive very fragile large white flowers. The flowers open after dark and die before sun rise. As romantic as that sounds I hope it doesn't describe you. I'm guessing your name is more descriptive of the duality of your personality, which is how I see this write as well.

Moon Flower
Date: 11/14/2017 8:09:00 PM

Thank you James for being around and for such wonderful thoughts of yours. :)