Sunlight

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sunlight's yellow rays illuminates fall's gray skies.... gold light touches blinds

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2017 2:33:00 PM

oh, I can really picture this

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/30/2017 11:37:00 AM

Quite a scenic depiction--well done, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/30/2017 2:58:00 PM

Vijay, Thanks for the visit..I feel you could see the scene yourself..Your presence is appreciate at my page..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/30/2017 8:14:00 AM

This is an excellent Haiku, a modern depiction of one with the sun and the magnificence of all it's glory shining through the darkness! A wondrous juxtaposition, quite the special reference, I love this feeling I get when I read this piece over and over again! Quite the tender write my friend! I really loved this piece, Great Work!!