Sunken Footsteps

Life has gifted me with tragedy,
broken images, forever haunting,
excruciating my suffering; blood
upon the pulse of my serenity.
Crystal lines are etched over this glaciered heart, 
and my tears wash blotches of thoughts 
that leaves me blank again daily.

Stolen by death, I am left mourning the assassins kill,
soul sliced open, like the parted sea.
Chained and bound I evade flirtatious eyes, 
to inhibit forbidden thoughts;
for love fled upon your precious wings,
survived only by my silent memories.
I stood alone in the midst of nightmares,
just searching for you amongst a midnight dream.

Alas,  although the stars filled my eyes, 
the sky gathered clouds and the Moon reigned misery, 
no peace to be found;
yet today the heavens opened and allowed me to breathe; 
I saw your face again, arms out-stretched, 
and you said: ”Love come to me,
but mere steps into the convalescent sea."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Hawksley Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 4:03 AM
Your poem, 'Sunken Footsteps,' is a breathtaking exploration of grief and longing. Your vivid imagery and heartfelt words paint a picture of emotional depth and resilience. The raw emotion and poetic skill you've displayed are truly inspiring. Thank you for sharing your soul with us.
Agustin Avatar
October 30, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Evsyukova Avatar
April 29, 2023 at 7:33 PM
I felt every word. Nightmares haunt me too. And also I hope you're doing okay now.
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July 23, 2022 at 8:34 AM
A most powerful, moving poem that recognizes that life isn't always a yellow brick road of joy. Your concluding lines offer restoration through love. Congratulations on a stirring write! Best wishes, Brian
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Gelok Avatar
April 8, 2022 at 1:59 PM
Your poetry rings familiar notes to me. It is so wonderfully written. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Bangalee Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Life is not a tragedy; it adventurous movement for every sing existence- goodly wrtten
Callus Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 3:36 AM
Hi Nicole...I just had to come and read your first contribution on Soup, and I am very much impressed. It is metaphorically beautiful and very touching. ~ Best regards // paul
Inman Avatar
March 29, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Exceptionally deep first post, beautifully written.
Vaso Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 12:15 AM
Very very beautiful, welcome back, I look forward to reading more of your poems!
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Thank you Arthur...so glad to be back on Poetry Soup! And thank you for your lovely reply!
Carrillo Avatar
May 31, 2014 at 10:46 AM
This poem is just beautiful. It is written with such tenderness and touching to the soul. Thanks for sharing and welcome to Poetry Soup. May you find many friends here..... Lucilla
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Thank you Lucilla...glad you liked this poem. Poetry Soup has a wealth of friendly people such as you!
Lindley Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Simply must add this to my fav!!! I love it and its power displayed!!
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Thank you very much Robert!
Yamin Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations on your elegant poem being featured this week. What a wonderful imagery. I liked the line "Sole sliced open like the parted sea". Wish you more successes to come. -Mohammad
Austin Avatar
August 22, 2008 at 5:42 AM
Congrats on this selection....very well imaged and colored. Who could not be touched by this one? Love, Daver
Mcgrath Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 9:49 AM
wonderful feelings exposed .
George   Avatar
August 20, 2008 at 1:43 AM
Very profoundly emotional write. Deep from the depths of the soul. Congratulations for your well deserved feature of the week. Lainie
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August 19, 2008 at 4:27 PM
What a sad, sad poem. Makes one wonder what happened to cause such grief and suffering. Whatever it was, I am sorry. Patricia
Jordan Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 12:15 PM
Very well written poem - Enjoyed every aspect of it - congrats on being featured this week
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August 18, 2008 at 8:47 AM
Your depth is that of a seasoned writer. Congratulations on "Sunken Footsteps" being featured. Vince
Winter Avatar
August 18, 2008 at 6:35 AM
Congratulation Nicole on this amazing poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Shar
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August 18, 2008 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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August 17, 2008 at 1:50 PM
Powerful images forward your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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