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Sunflower

She smiled shyly up at the sunlight Unleashing her unbridled passion Nodding naively at Daystar bright Flaming in fascinated fashion Languishing in lustrous love's lost plight Overwhelmed by Sol's pure compassion Withering without His warming sight Enjoying endless satisfaction Romancing with welkin's regal knight 05.24.2021 9 syllables per line {Love of the sunflower for the sun} For Malabika's "Sunflower" contest

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Date: 1/4/2024 6:19:00 PM
What a very pretty poem. It has such a warm and friendly feeling. I love your fourth line and your sixth line so much. I am delighted to have found this sunny one.
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Date: 6/1/2021 11:43:00 AM
Oh, this is "regal royalty" in verse, Jo. Very clever personification and delightful alliteration all in 9 syllables per line. Well done. Congratulations. Blessings!
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Date: 6/1/2021 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. I enjoyed it very much. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 6/1/2021 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. It's a beautiful poem ~ Mala
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Date: 5/24/2021 8:46:00 AM
An enjoyable acrostic. The sunflower is a lovely during the day.
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