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Sunfilled peacefulness

sunfilled peacefulness
ever teeter tottering
bouts of cloudiness



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Isor Chand

November 19, 2017 at 4:45 AM

Eight words , Eight infinities... Line

Line Gauthier

November 19, 2017 at 10:34 AM

Thank you for your visit, Isor.

Susan Ashley

November 18, 2017 at 7:02 PM

Such a beautiful and awe-inspiring Haiku Line. Excellent and enjoyed!

Line Gauthier

November 18, 2017 at 7:37 PM

Thanks, Susan. Best wishes to you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 6, 2017 at 2:27 PM

- Thanks ... peaceful lines, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

November 6, 2017 at 5:13 PM

Thanks for your visit, Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful week!

Janis Medders Tobechi

November 6, 2017 at 8:28 AM

This can often be used to compare our moods from day to day or just life in general. Nice haiku.

Line Gauthier

November 6, 2017 at 9:34 AM

Thanks, Janice. Have an awesome day!

Joanna Daniel

November 6, 2017 at 5:58 AM

Great comparison, Line, reminds that the sun is always behind those clouds :)

Line Gauthier

November 6, 2017 at 6:06 AM

Hi Jo, thanks for your visit and for leaving a comment. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2017 at 8:01 PM

I like this. It really captures that emotional teeter totter that is life.

Line Gauthier

November 6, 2017 at 6:05 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Have a wonderful day!

John Fleming

November 5, 2017 at 7:16 PM

Rather an eye-catching comparison you have penned here, Line; almost like the difference between cool Spring and warm Summer...yes, I quite like it. My best regards. :) john

Line Gauthier

November 5, 2017 at 7:19 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, John.