Sunday Morning

Sunday morning shadows floating cross the room
golden morning sunbeams dancing on the wall
Sunday morning touching lightly slowly touching
laying in my tangled Sunday morning bed

as my hands slowly ever so lightly
touch your smooth warm flesh
touching with all my tenderness
from head to toe they search to find
the hidden corners of your mind
in my tangled Sunday morning bed

touching places that have
never been touched like this before
in the early morning shadows
softly laying touching in my
tangled Sunday morning bed

Dennis Davis
Sept. 2004

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/28/2011 12:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place in Nette's contest, " Soft Sensuality ". Sensuality is better expressed on Sunday morning. I wish you more wins like this. Peace and Love, Andrew.
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Date: 9/27/2011 9:51:00 PM
Congratulations Dennis on your win with this dreamy work.....cheers Margaret
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Date: 9/27/2011 4:18:00 PM
nice.... real, real nice! congrats, Dennis, and thanks for the ethereal write! Beauty day~N
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Date: 9/27/2011 4:08:00 PM
Congrats Dennis on first place win with this fantastic piece for the contest luv..
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Date: 9/27/2011 3:41:00 PM
I'm honored to share a "morning" with you!! Congratulations, Dennis!
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:07:00 PM
he repetition makes the verse very dreamy evoking just the right mood. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2011 1:00:00 PM
What a great win you have here in Nette's "Soft Sensuality contest, congratulations Dennis. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2011 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Dennis
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Date: 5/8/2010 1:05:00 PM
I love this poem. It is very sensual. Thank you for calling it to my attention and thank you for all the nice comments on my poem. Scarlett
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Date: 5/7/2010 2:57:00 PM
Great write that depicts passion without really expressing it directly..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work the kind comments were greatly appreciated..Sara
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Date: 5/1/2010 1:02:00 PM
Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. NOW GET UP AND MAKE YOUR BED. Just kidding. Great job.
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Date: 5/1/2010 12:27:00 PM
impressive write, enjoyed,..p.d.
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