Sunday Morn

quiet Sunday morn, up at my usual time — it’s one hour early. grandson and husband sleeping i read and write in silence. i’ve hardly looked up — no hesitation breathing. yes, God’s good that way. my heart palpitates in caffeinated language. the poetic muse with socks and mismatched pjs — washbasin of thoughts. the silky water is pure barely moving through fingers. the dove does not hurry time, no predators — sailboat peacefully glides… 11/3/2019 3 tankas and a monoku

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Date: 11/9/2019 11:05:00 AM
This left me breathless... a truly lovely write indeed. You are master of the pen. The one with the long feather plume. Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Ann! <3 Kim
Date: 11/7/2019 10:57:00 AM
Nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/5/2019 12:38:00 AM
A gorgeous morning described in the prettiest of ways Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 11/4/2019 6:09:00 AM
- A wonderful morning, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2019 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Sunshine :)
Date: 11/4/2019 3:07:00 AM
Enjoyed your morning as shared. Sounds perfect to me! You have a gift with both words and imagery. That last line is beyond any medicre thing I can say...FAVE Love, Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/4/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Panagiota! xx
Date: 11/3/2019 2:16:00 PM
Lovely. I have mismatched as well... A cup of coffee, and time... how lovely my friend. God Bless your day. Ann
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 3:51:00 PM
God bless you :)
Date: 11/3/2019 2:03:00 PM
Our clocks changed too. But I like to sit up early in the morning before my husband gets up and just relax by myself too. This made me really relate. Good stuff. God Bless, JB .
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 3:51:00 PM
The quiet before the day begins..always nice!
Date: 11/3/2019 11:39:00 AM
I see your clocks have changed.... I think many a poet can relate to this ..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 3:51:00 PM
For sure!
Date: 11/3/2019 7:29:00 AM
This is a great way to start my day. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2019 7:45:00 AM
No contest just an early morning write. Thanks, Richard!
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