Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

Sunday Morn

quiet Sunday morn,
up at my usual time —
it’s one hour early.
grandson and husband sleeping
i read and write in silence.

i’ve hardly looked up —
no hesitation breathing.
yes, God’s good that way.
my heart palpitates
in caffeinated language.

the poetic muse
with socks and mismatched pjs —
washbasin of thoughts.
the silky water is pure
barely moving through fingers.

the dove does not hurry time, no predators — sailboat peacefully glides…

11/3/2019
3 tankas and a monoku

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Ann Foster November 9, 2019 at 11:05 AM This left me breathless... a truly lovely write indeed. You are master of the pen. The one with the long feather plume. Ann Kim Rodrigues November 9, 2019 at 11:44 AM Thank you, Ann! <3 Kim

Hi-Dong Chai November 7, 2019 at 10:57 AM Nice! Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 10:59 AM Thank you :)

Caren Krutsinger November 5, 2019 at 12:38 AM A gorgeous morning described in the prettiest of ways Kim. Kim Rodrigues November 7, 2019 at 10:59 AM Thank you, Caren!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 4, 2019 at 6:09 AM - A wonderful morning, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2019 at 3:47 PM Thank you, Sunshine :)

Panagiota Romios November 4, 2019 at 3:07 AM Enjoyed your morning as shared. Sounds perfect to me! You have a gift with both words and imagery. That last line is beyond any medicre thing I can say...FAVE Love, Panagiota xx Kim Rodrigues November 4, 2019 at 5:31 AM Thank you, Panagiota! xx

Ann Foster November 3, 2019 at 2:16 PM Lovely. I have mismatched as well... A cup of coffee, and time... how lovely my friend. God Bless your day. Ann Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2019 at 3:51 PM God bless you :)

Judy Ball November 3, 2019 at 2:03 PM Our clocks changed too. But I like to sit up early in the morning before my husband gets up and just relax by myself too. This made me really relate. Good stuff. God Bless, JB . Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2019 at 3:51 PM The quiet before the day begins..always nice!

Silent One November 3, 2019 at 11:39 AM I see your clocks have changed.... I think many a poet can relate to this .. Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2019 at 3:51 PM For sure!

Richard Lamoureux November 3, 2019 at 7:29 AM This is a great way to start my day. Good luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2019 at 7:45 AM No contest just an early morning write. Thanks, Richard!