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Sunday Evening's Strange

Sunday evening 
   just feels strange
It's still the weekend
   yet it's not the same

Monday's coming 
   and that means work
All relaxed now?
   Ha! -- Perils lurk

The commuter crush
   You rush, rush, rush
to your desk by eight
   or else you're late

The phone is ringing
   The boss keeps pinging
The system's crashed; what failed?
   Your program bailed

So, take a deep breath
   Then break out in a sweat
It's your lucky day
   ~ Your pink slip's all set

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 11/18/2019 4:55:00 AM
Love the snappy ending to this poem. It also speaks of our experience. No one these days would know what a "pink slip" is.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2019 1:46:00 PM
I was surprised to read that youngsters wouldn't know what a pink slip is. So I asked my 22-year old if he knew. He told me: "Sure, Dad. That's what you got in May!" Smart alec kid. (Just kidding; he's GREAT!). :) gw
Date: 11/18/2019 12:01:00 AM
Here it is Saturday evenings.. Nice poem
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/18/2019 1:49:00 PM
Do most people work on Sundays 'there?' ~ Curious
Date: 11/17/2019 9:43:00 PM
GW I can't relate to this I am retired LOL Have fun tomorrow :-)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/17/2019 10:24:00 PM
Ha, ha! 'm retired too, and wrote it... Hope this doesn't mean that we're not RELATives anymore, Bobby. LOL. Thanks, Gershon

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