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Sunday by Necessity

Rainy day today
Rainy day Sunday
Sunday on par
Sunday too far
Far better now
Far to go
Go with wind
Go with breeze
Breeze dries clothes
Breeze dries hair
Hair curls softly 
Hair curls tight
Tight rope walker
Tight rope act
Act one action
Act one scene
Scene from train
Scene from ship
Ship sail seas
Ship has captain
Captain steers ship
Captain flies plane 
Plane glides in
Plane takes off
Off we go
Off to market
Market sales on
Market price war
War is unpeaceful
War is evil
Evil isnt good    
Evil is not nice 
Nice is sweet
Nice is better
Better is fortunate
Better is precious
Precious is valuable
Precious is priceless
Priceless is art
Priceless is good health
Health is important
Health is imperative  
Imperative is urgent
Imperative is pressing
Pressing is ironing
Pressing is necessity
Necessity is Blitz 
Necessity is fine
Fine.
Blitz

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Sara Kendrick February 19, 2024 at 9:42 AM Congratulations on your winning work in Silent One's contest. Way to go. We've had a lot of rainy weekends lately, but this one is supposed to be nice. Enjoy. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K Speaks Volumes February 19, 2024 at 4:46 PM Thanks so much Sara.

I Am Anaya February 17, 2024 at 1:04 PM At first I tried to stay with only 3 words a line like yours, but I noticed they do more. Very sensible are your choices, liked it. Congratulations on your win SV! Speaks Volumes February 19, 2024 at 4:46 PM Thanx Anaya I don know why it placed. But thank you

Silent One February 17, 2024 at 11:25 AM Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Speaks Volumes February 19, 2024 at 4:42 PM S.O. I make a terrible punter. When I think I have done well its a flop when judged, and when I know I have no hope against all the other good entries, I blitz it and it places. Glad you liked it, to be honest I didn't ! LOL But hey, I am not complaining. Thanks so much.

Christina Bowring January 21, 2024 at 3:27 PM This is very clever my lovely poetic friend. Yet another new form to me. I’m so impressed with how many you can do! I don’t think I could even attempt this. I’m with Sara, I’ve read it a few times too. Love the flow here with your skilfully chosen words. I read it aloud and one line in particular stood out for me, ‘ ship sail seas ‘ - quite a tongue twister. There’s a few there actually. A wonderful creation dear Wen. Thank you for inspiring. Hugs and smiles xx :):) Speaks Volumes January 21, 2024 at 4:48 PM Thanks Chris, this form of "poetry" insists on 50 lines... Thanks for your amazing comment. I wish my Blitz was as amazing. Best wishes Wen