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Sunday by Necessity

Rainy day today Rainy day Sunday Sunday on par Sunday too far Far better now Far to go Go with wind Go with breeze Breeze dries clothes Breeze dries hair Hair curls softly Hair curls tight Tight rope walker Tight rope act Act one action Act one scene Scene from train Scene from ship Ship sail seas Ship has captain Captain steers ship Captain flies plane Plane glides in Plane takes off Off we go Off to market Market sales on Market price war War is unpeaceful War is evil Evil isnt good Evil is not nice Nice is sweet Nice is better Better is fortunate Better is precious Precious is valuable Precious is priceless Priceless is art Priceless is good health Health is important Health is imperative Imperative is urgent Imperative is pressing Pressing is ironing Pressing is necessity Necessity is Blitz Necessity is fine Fine. Blitz

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Date: 2/19/2024 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Silent One's contest. Way to go. We've had a lot of rainy weekends lately, but this one is supposed to be nice. Enjoy. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 2/19/2024 4:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Sara.
Date: 2/17/2024 1:04:00 PM
At first I tried to stay with only 3 words a line like yours, but I noticed they do more. Very sensible are your choices, liked it. Congratulations on your win SV!
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Date: 2/19/2024 4:46:00 PM
Thanx Anaya I don know why it placed. But thank you
Date: 2/17/2024 11:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/19/2024 4:42:00 PM
S.O. I make a terrible punter. When I think I have done well its a flop when judged, and when I know I have no hope against all the other good entries, I blitz it and it places. Glad you liked it, to be honest I didn't ! LOL But hey, I am not complaining. Thanks so much.
Date: 1/21/2024 3:27:00 PM
This is very clever my lovely poetic friend. Yet another new form to me. I’m so impressed with how many you can do! I don’t think I could even attempt this. I’m with Sara, I’ve read it a few times too. Love the flow here with your skilfully chosen words. I read it aloud and one line in particular stood out for me, ‘ ship sail seas ‘ - quite a tongue twister. There’s a few there actually. A wonderful creation dear Wen. Thank you for inspiring. Hugs and smiles xx :):)
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Date: 1/21/2024 4:48:00 PM
Thanks Chris, this form of "poetry" insists on 50 lines... Thanks for your amazing comment. I wish my Blitz was as amazing. Best wishes Wen

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