Sunday

It was a bright sunny day in July When he tosses me in the air with a smile He really made me believe that I could fly What an inherent memory that's worthwhile We walked hand in hand in the park Flowers are all in bloom and the birds sing I hide behind him when I heard the dogs bark Feeling secured that's what he brings Years gone by and this is me Enjoying an equal sunny day with my dad Sit in the shade of a large tree With gratitude for all Sundays we had

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Date: 9/25/2013 1:22:00 PM
You are lucky one that you enjoy all the sun days' charm. My Birth day too. Beautifully done. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2013 6:25:00 AM
This is a heartwarming poem. I wish both my parents were still alive... You don't realize how important they are until they're gone. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/9/2013 6:55:00 AM
They're still and keep alive in your memories, Connie.. :) *Hug ~Shirley
Date: 7/8/2013 5:55:00 PM
Oh, I love this! So beautiful. The imagery, the emotion, it was all there for me. Excellent write!
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 10:05:00 PM
Thank you for the knd review, April.. *hug*
Date: 7/8/2013 6:23:00 AM
- A pleasant Sunday poem. - Like it, well done! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise... *hug* :)
Date: 7/8/2013 3:27:00 AM
Pictures taken with Dad can jog our memories and make the times together so precious. Great images... and so poignant... Love you dearly.... Jake
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/8/2013 8:57:00 AM
Couldn't be more agree with you, Jake. Yes...times spent with our beloved one are precious. Those are made to remember. Thank you for dropping by and leave a comment on my poem... ^_^
Date: 7/7/2013 10:06:00 PM
Nicely written. I lost my dad four and a half years ago.
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/7/2013 10:28:00 PM
Sorry to hear that, Rob :( Funny how the time flies by so fast. It feels like only yesterday we're cuddling in dads arms. And then seeing that beloved face with wrinkles, and that grey hair..oh my.. ;(
Date: 7/7/2013 11:25:00 AM
Excellent one enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/7/2013 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, BL..have visited your poems too just a minute ago..I enjoyed what I read today.. ^_^
Date: 7/7/2013 8:07:00 AM
How wonderfully adorable! I just hugged my Dad good bye a week ago today, before I flew home. I miss him so much and the rest of the family. Written memories like this are what it's all about. Beautiful work, Shirley/Candy! ;-)
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Shirley Candy
Date: 7/7/2013 8:58:00 PM
Well, I'm a daddy girl type, Drake.. I have strong relation with my dad. "Dad is my hero" ~ really related to me :D
Date: 7/7/2013 6:00:00 AM
Beautifully penned Shirley.I hope all is well today.Greetings to you.
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Date: 7/7/2013 8:59:00 PM
All is well, M...wishing you a great day too!! ^__^
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