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Sunburn

The sun was hot, dear Jack did burn
He fell asleep and forgot to turn
His cheeks do hurt
He wears a skirt
The fellas asking him out is his only concern

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2015

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May 16, 2015 at 3:58 AM

Ha ha. this is hilarious. love your humour. Good moral to this story. But never get any problem wearing my skirt. thanks for he smile this morning. take good care. Pete.

May 15, 2015 at 7:45 PM

Young Jack will bloody murder you Tim after spilling his drink all over his sunburn. Thanks for the chuckle Tim - Lindsay

May 15, 2015 at 2:23 PM

this really burns, lol... enjoyed the skirt, tim.. huggs

May 15, 2015 at 3:25 PM

Thanks nette ....next time he needs to apply some sunscreen

May 15, 2015 at 11:00 AM

Ha, Ha, The ending was masterfully inspired. Emile.

May 15, 2015 at 3:22 PM

Thanks Emile.....Jack is down in Florida burning it up

Charmaine Chircop

May 15, 2015 at 9:13 AM

Lol : )..

May 15, 2015 at 9:15 AM

Glad you like it : )) ...poor Santa

May 15, 2015 at 7:32 AM

ha ha ha love it:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

May 15, 2015 at 7:35 AM

Thanks Jan....hope Jack used sunscreen down in Florida.

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