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Sunbird Haiku

fire-tailed sunbird -

the creator’s palette

ablaze with colours 



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© February 2021

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Paghunda Zahid

May 4, 2021 at 8:54 AM

That's a beautiful pic and a brilliant Haiku Paul

Paul Callus

May 8, 2021 at 7:46 AM

Thank you Paghunda. Pleased you enjoyed. Have a lovely weekend :) Regards // paul

Timothy Hicks

March 23, 2021 at 7:15 PM

I remember seeing you share this one over Facebook ... not sure if I commented or not, but either way. It's a striking li'l haiku for a striking li'l bird.

Paul Callus

March 28, 2021 at 1:50 PM

You are right, Timothy. In fact this poem was posted simultaneously on 4 different venues! Thank you for reading and liking, my friend. Best regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury

March 22, 2021 at 8:21 AM

How beautiful - the picture, the bird, and definitely the poem! "Creator's palette ablaze with colours" - Amazing words ~ Mala

Paul Callus

March 28, 2021 at 1:48 PM

Thank you for the complimentary comments, Mala! Hope you had a lovely weekend. ~ Regards // paul

Judy Ball

March 8, 2021 at 10:57 AM

WoW! What a beauteiful bird. Never saw one like that before. He almost looks like the flower he perches on. Super write and the picture is perfect. Well Done! A fave. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:58 AM

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Judy....and for the fav!! Much appreciated. Regards & Blessings // paul

Phyllis Babcock

March 8, 2021 at 10:46 AM

Beautiful picture and gives me a glimpse of spring. Expecting snow tonight so this picture gives hope of spring. love phyl

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:56 AM

Thank you, Phyllis. Over here the weather is getting warmer, and I can certainly feel spring in the air! Best regards // paul

Jack Horne

March 5, 2021 at 12:31 PM

a beautiful picture here, my friend

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:49 AM

Glad you enjoyed, Jack; thank you; all the best .. paul

Eileen Manassian

March 5, 2021 at 7:34 AM

A feast for the eyes and mind. Well written.

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:50 AM

Thank you dear friend. your feedback is truly appreciated. Hugs // paul

Richard Lamoureux

March 4, 2021 at 6:45 AM

Cool, I didn’t know that about the Haiga. Thanks for your visit to my seeker poem.

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:42 AM

Thank you, Richard. Regards // paul

Harry Horsman

March 2, 2021 at 6:15 PM

Wonderful haiku, Paul it is within the words i find colourful.

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 5:41 AM

Pleased you found it to your liking, Harry....thank you. Regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney

March 2, 2021 at 5:51 PM

Great Haiga, Paul: I can just see it printed on there. Excellent pairing of pictures and words. Best, SuZ

Paul Callus

March 10, 2021 at 2:21 AM

Thank you, Suz. I too look forward to your visits. Warm regards // paul

Pashang Salehi

March 1, 2021 at 3:29 PM

Pretty nice...the creator’s palette, maybe Natural selection...

Pashang Salehi

March 9, 2021 at 6:40 PM

Always...

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 2:03 PM

Pleased you like it, Pashang...thank you. Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree

March 1, 2021 at 12:35 PM

Back to read this masterpiece again, Paul. Hope you have a great week :)

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 5:54 AM

Thank you for re-reading, Angela. I've neglected Soup these last few days...guilty of being too busy:) Best regards, my friend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

February 27, 2021 at 7:33 AM

A gorgeous haiku Paul! It won’t be long until spring. This has been a bitter cold winter for many, especially for the east coast and Texas and other parts of the south US that are not prepared for such cold. Have a wonderful week my friend. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 1:45 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit, Connie, and excuse my late reply. We're having lovely weather now; spring is already in the air! Warm regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

February 25, 2021 at 3:04 PM

A great paring of photo and Ku. Maybe you can start a new for called Photoku.

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 11:25 AM

Thank you Richard. In fact your "Photoku" already exists under the name of Haiga; usually the haiku is printed on the photo itself. ~ Regards // paul

Alexis Y.

February 25, 2021 at 11:06 AM

Hi Paul, What a beautiful photo. It compliments your words very well. Is your write for a contest? Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Michael Tor

February 24, 2021 at 2:46 PM

What a great photograph Paul, and words that match as well my friend.

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 11:40 AM

Thank you, Michael. It was the photo which prompted the poem. Regards // paul

Suzette Richards

February 23, 2021 at 9:26 PM

I am always amazed at the variety of colours to be found in nature, especially among birds. I follow a photographer (Frans de Waal) and he regularly takes my breath away with the beautiful shots of birds that he shares on fb. A lovely haiku honouring the Greator. ~Sus

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 11:43 AM

Thank you for a pleasant visit, Sus. I will make it a point to look up Frans de Waal and his photos; I might be inspired by some of them! Best regards // paul

Quoth Theraven

February 23, 2021 at 6:50 PM

Paul, Color in brilliant Haiku signed with a soft touch to catch the eye. He does mix colors so well. -Richard

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 11:41 AM

Thank you Richard. Nature is definitely a mirror of its creator! Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

February 23, 2021 at 12:56 PM

Wow, is this a local bird? I've never seen one, but your description is awesome, Paul. Just look at those vivid colors! Excellent haiku, my friend. Hugs, Carolyn

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 11:39 AM

Unfortunately we don't have any birds like those on our little island, Carolyn; in fact birds are somewhat scarce. Thank you for stopping by. Hugs // paul

Jack Horne

February 23, 2021 at 11:34 AM

this is beautiful. I hope all is well with you, my friend

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 7:41 AM

All is fine, my friend. Thank you! Regards // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

February 23, 2021 at 9:57 AM

And so much more our creator with his palette has given us the birds, animals coastal scenes the beautiful oceans, the soulful clouds - but the fire-tailed sunbird sounds like one of the most awesome sights on earth with its colours ablaze. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 5:57 AM

Thank you dear Jenny for your feedback. I'm very backwards in replying; playing catching up does not always work well for me...time to don my running shoes:) Warm regards & Hugs // paul

Paula Goldsmith

February 23, 2021 at 9:35 AM

Few words with much said. A pretty write and colorful picture. Love your line, "the creator’s palette." So very true. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Paul Callus

March 2, 2021 at 7:28 AM

Thank you, Paula. Glad you enjoyed. ~ Best regards // paul

Akkina Downing

February 23, 2021 at 5:54 AM

Bird and flowers made a beautiful colorful shape of heart... Paul, your haiku is simply gorgeous :)

Paul Callus

February 23, 2021 at 9:24 AM

You are too kind, Akkina...thank you! Regards // paul

Angela Crabtree

February 22, 2021 at 10:19 PM

A great haiku, Paul. Such a colorful bird. Are their a lot of them there where you live? Hope you have a great week :)

Paul Callus

February 23, 2021 at 9:23 AM

Thank you, Angela. I have only seen this bird online and in magazines; in Malta birds are not that common :( Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Regards // paul