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sunbathing bareback mosquito season over life is good posted on June 1, 2018

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Date: 6/2/2018 7:56:00 AM
Ha ha, cute one!
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:09:00 AM
Thanks, Richard.
Date: 6/2/2018 4:25:00 AM
A vacation...those kamikazes are dangerous...All the best Line
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:10:00 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo.
Date: 6/1/2018 5:49:00 PM
Your so good at these! ...bareback sunbathing
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Date: 6/1/2018 7:50:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. It is true that one out the box word does make an impact.
Date: 6/1/2018 3:26:00 PM
"Life is very good" 5 syllables in the last line. ie. 5, 7, 5 makes it a Haiku is what I was told. Hope this makes sense to you my dear friend.
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Date: 6/1/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Carlos. Much appreciated.