Sun Undressed Quickly

Sun undressed quickly, getting on her traveling outfit.
Night dropped her dark robes onto the landscape behind her.
She smiled as the stars rushed in.

5:38 a.m.? Moon called after her
As she headed for her second job.
Sun did not look back,
But Moon was satisfied.

Moon called the shots,
For she was the 
Aggressive one
In This Fleeting
Relationship.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 3/2/2019 3:39:00 PM
Lotsa imagery! Cool!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 6:52:00 PM
I love them both so much; it was easily done.
Date: 3/2/2019 11:55:00 AM
DAmn... Thats a universal relationship..
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 6:52:00 PM
It certainly is, and fun to think about.
Date: 3/2/2019 11:45:00 AM
Cosmic choreography masterfully unfolding dearest, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 6:53:00 PM
I am flabbergasted by your lovely comment my friend. Thank you so much!
Date: 3/1/2019 10:47:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/2/2019 4:17:00 AM
Thank you. I had fun figuring it out, for sure. I love twilight! And always marvel the sun is rushing to her other "gig" when she leaves.
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