Russell Sivey Poet Quatern

Sun Sparkles

Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits
Inspiration comes from each reflection
The stream goes and flows through some trees and bits
Land covers special portion and section

Trees have golden orange leaves that filled them
Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits
Bushes that remained green are quite the gem
Seems the ground is alive with yellow pits

The sun comes in through the trees with some grit
It illumines not just water, but leaves
Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits
Trees also show off how the red believes

Beauty shines right where I stand looking down
All this land for a King it sure befits
I would surely bring the maker a crown
Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits

Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich March 3, 2014 at 6:28 PM a sparkling poem, Russell. Quaterns are a lot of fun. I love seeing that one line moving every time to a different part of the next stanza. Russell Sivey March 3, 2014 at 9:17 PM Yeah it's fun incorporating this line to all stanzas, but it's also challenging to rhyme. Thank you for your comment.

Donna Jones March 3, 2014 at 6:22 PM Russell you've described every detail so vividly I can see it...wonderful job....

Nette Onclaud March 2, 2014 at 4:09 PM oh my, russell...this piece glows with such brilliance much like the sun you speak of.. love the energy and beauty of this piece!.. huggs

Robert Pettit March 2, 2014 at 11:05 AM This poem sparkles as well. Good write.

Jack Horne March 2, 2014 at 10:22 AM just beautiful, my friend

Kayod5 Kayode March 2, 2014 at 5:14 AM I specifically fall for the last stanza,what a beautiful way to end a great work like this;God is good all the times.Kudos Russell.

Charmaine Chircop March 2, 2014 at 1:04 AM Our maker deserves a crown..and this king is special cause He gave the kingdom of nature to us..The imagery of the sun is vividly beautiful in this poem..I really can feel its golden shimmer upon me.Awesome!