Sun Shine

Oh, the sun shines and the wind blows
the crisp, apple-wind, blows,
laughing through the half shorn tresses
of the sugar maple trees.

Oh, the sun shines and the shadows fall
like long gray mufflers, foreshadowing,
the wraps of winter winds
and frost on dawn's green grasses

Oh, the sun shines and the heart sings
full and ripe as the pie pumpkins
waiting to be picked 
and the comforters calling from the beds
of cuddling children.

Oh, let the sun shine for it fills my soul
for when the dark of winter persists
I will remember this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Curcio Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 6:13 PM
I love this piece Deb. It's so evocative of the sun and keeping it with you through the cold winter months. Great poem!
Keen Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 2:02 PM
My sun shined so bright after reading this epic of a poem
George   Avatar
October 29, 2009 at 9:22 AM
This beautiful piece of free verse painted very vivid pictures in my mind. I too will remember this when frozen in a winter's kiss. Great writing Deb, Love, Lainie
Itticheria Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 5:22 PM
Lovely poetry Deborah,sun shine is always beautiful and refreshing to the soul.I liked the poetry,great imagery that makes one feel good. Thanks for your comments on mine. Best wishes, Chacko
Souders Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 1:10 PM
again your talent is prevalent in this one great write Johnathon
Griffiths Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 10:18 AM
Lovely poem, everyone likes the sun shine. Pam.
Knop Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 5:16 PM
I definately keep the sun shine in my heart so winter could come. By then I will have moved far way from here and hope that everything will be ok. Keep writing, Deborah! Love, Gert
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww yes Deborah. Now it goes to Favs. I know right where it is and I can read it anytime.Thank you for a ~~~Magnificent~~~ read my friend. Love, Carol
Joseph Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 8:48 AM
this reads like an unfinished song from the 1940's..very vintage in flavor
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2009 at 4:19 AM
Deborah, I enjoyed reading your poem this morning but..... it ended before I was ready to stop reading it. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 3:35 PM
Love the phrase... "laughing through the half shorn tresses"....a wonderful description of a fall tree!! NICE!
Kendrick Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 2:11 PM
Interesting fall write. Keep writing. Sara
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