Sun Rising

Sun rising afresh.
Breeze rippling the sea, like dreams 
rippling restless hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/10/2014 10:19:00 AM
Thank you for your enthusiastic words. I promise I'll visit your poems (although I think I've read and commented on some of some). Thank you again. I have got no time now. Wish the best to you. I love short poetry!
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Date: 8/8/2014 8:03:00 PM
Hope you will visit a lot of other poets in case you are not doing it already. Some are happy to return the visit and you are someone that deserves to be seen. My new favorite poet of the week. Don't mind me, I am not a stalker. I just find a poet once in a while that is new to me and I visit LOTS of his or her poems. Have a nice weekend!
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Date: 8/10/2014 10:20:00 AM
Thank you for your enthusiastic words. I promise I'll visit your poems (although I think I've read and commented on some of some). Thank you again. I have got no time now. Wish the best to you. I love short poetry! (By mistake I replied to you on the comments side!)
Date: 8/8/2014 8:01:00 PM
aha, the summer again. or maybe the sun of autumn. I see you wrote this in the fall maybe two years ago. I am going to end here on seeing your poetry. I nearly finished, but I am hoping you will visit me one day and then I will return to see the rest of your poems. (please don't reply to me on the reply button in case you were thinking of it. I had that reply notification turned off because it was annoying me).
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Date: 7/27/2013 8:25:00 PM
Very true
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Date: 12/5/2012 9:33:00 AM
Good haiku, but repeating the word rippling spoils it a touch.
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Date: 10/6/2012 6:23:00 AM
Exquisite... If there was a 100 rating, it would by yours... You truly have the heart of a poet... Victoria
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Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/30/2013 2:40:00 AM
I am very glad you liked it that much.Thanks a lot!
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