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Sun Rising

Sun rising afresh. Breeze rippling the sea, like dreams rippling restless hearts.

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Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 8/10/2014 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for your enthusiastic words. I promise I'll visit your poems (although I think I've read and commented on some of some). Thank you again. I have got no time now. Wish the best to you. I love short poetry!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:03:00 PM

Hope you will visit a lot of other poets in case you are not doing it already. Some are happy to return the visit and you are someone that deserves to be seen. My new favorite poet of the week. Don't mind me, I am not a stalker. I just find a poet once in a while that is new to me and I visit LOTS of his or her poems. Have a nice weekend!

Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 8/10/2014 10:20:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:01:00 PM

aha, the summer again. or maybe the sun of autumn. I see you wrote this in the fall maybe two years ago. I am going to end here on seeing your poetry. I nearly finished, but I am hoping you will visit me one day and then I will return to see the rest of your poems. (please don't reply to me on the reply button in case you were thinking of it. I had that reply notification turned off because it was annoying me).

Karen Croft

Date: 7/27/2013 8:25:00 PM

Very true

Colin Coates

Date: 12/5/2012 9:33:00 AM

Good haiku, but repeating the word rippling spoils it a touch.

Victoria Anderson-Throop

Date: 10/6/2012 6:23:00 AM

Exquisite... If there was a 100 rating, it would by yours... You truly have the heart of a poet... Victoria

Vassilis Comporozos
Date: 7/30/2013 2:40:00 AM

I am very glad you liked it that much.Thanks a lot!