Sun Rising

the stars final twinkle

dissapears from the dark sky

as moon falls asleep and 

sun begins to rise

breaking the phase of 

night to day

i watch with coffee in hand

blinding my sight for a moment

enlightening my senses

time to get motivated

awake and off to work

easing my view of all wild life

enroute along the way

that only dark would hide,

but sunrise brings to light

sunrise sunset contest
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Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 7:50 AM
Beautiful and very creative write for the contest Karen.. much success in HG's contest.. brilliant especially that first line intro luv..
Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 4:44 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and creative work..Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara
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