Sun Or Sea

Neither unknown like sun
Nor known like sea
I want a person who is written in my destiny

Not perfect like sun
Not excited like sea
I want a person whom i sees in my dreams

Not kind like sun
Not proper like sea  
I want a person who always stays near me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Desires expressed in a well written poem cannot go unfulfilled ....keep up with the spontaneous metaphors....
Gehlawat Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 4:41 AM
thanks a lot! Sir.
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